FADE IN:
eXT. snowy meadow - aFTERNOON

The snow-covered ground looks beautiful as it reflects the sunlight that manages to peak through murky clouds.
As far as the eye can see the ground is covered in snow, not a single blade of grass managing to breach the barrier of white.  An entire day is shown passing in a minute.  Then the amount of time it takes for the sun to go up and down decreases.  Soon an entire week is shown in a minute, then a month.  Entire seasons are shown, and throughout all but the mild summers the land seems to always be blanketed with snow.  Entire years are passing, and the narrator begins speaking when humans suddenly appear on scene and are building a small wooden palisade, time now slowing down slightly.  
NARRATOR (V.O.) 
Centuries ago followers of the Metal God were a scattered band of people.  Eventually many of them came together in one area and created the foundations of the Kingdom of Metallicus.
The wooden palisade is replaced with a mighty stone fortress, many homes within its walls and many more houses and farmland outside of it.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
It quickly grew to be the most powerful kingdom in the Enchanted Realm in part thanks to its central location in the Realm, making it a hub for trade. But also because of its mighty army the Templars of Steel, who eventually drove all the despots and warlords out of the known world.  A golden age of peace and prosperity ensued.
A few quick scenes of plentiful crops, armored Templars of Steel parading through towns, and cheering, jovial people... farmers, merchants, and royalty, all equally happy. 
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
But this widespread wealth soon brought upon us the attention of the Dominion of Draconian, the last unexplored territory in the Enchanted Realm.  They launched devastating invasions into kingdoms unfortunate enough to neighbor them.  These kingdoms swiftly fell to the brute force of the Draconians, horrible creatures never before seen.
A Draconian, what appears to be a mix between a man and a dragon, is shown.  The creature stands at a menacing seven feet and is only clothed in a loincloth and shoulder armor.  Its crimson eyes focus in the direction of the camera and swings a mighty battle axe at it.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Metallicus quickly called for a crusade to drive the horde of invaders back.  The Templars fought the Dracanions for three long brutal months before they were able to push them back towards the lands of Draconius.  The Battle of Farpoint was the final battle of the Great War.
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ext. OPEN plain - EVENING
Two huge armies, one the armored forms of the Templars, and the other the beastly Draconians, clash in vicious combat on a snowy plain which is soon stained with crimson.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
It was the greatest, and bloodiest, battle in the history of the Realm. The Draconians were defeated, but only five hundred Templars out of tens of thousands survived the Pyrrhic victory.  
The former battlefield is covered with thousands upon thousands of dead Templars intermingled with the dead bodies of the Draconian army.  The few Templar that survived are hard at work digging graves for their fallen comrades and burying them. 
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
When all the dead were buried, the Templars marched back to the capital of Metallicus, Iron Keep.  They were ambushed by an army of Marauders, a vast group of thugs, thieves, and mercenaries.  The heavily outnumbered Templars were completely surprised, no armed enemy had set foot in Iron Keep or the entire kingdom for two centuries.  
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int. IRON keep, courtyard - DAY
The Marauders, an assortment of men who mostly look like they could use a bath and are dressed in dirty fur skin clothes, charge the Templars from all sides.   
NARRATOR (v.O.) (CONT'D)
The Templars put up stout resistance, but the battle weary warriors faced too great of odds and their spirits were crushed when they learned the King's trusted general, Lord Dronjak, and the King's sorcerer, the Ravenlord, had betrayed Metallicus and were in command of the Marauders.  The citizens of Iron Keep rose up in armed rebellion to aid the Templars.  It failed to defeat the Marauders, but it allowed a handful of Templars to escape the battle with their lives.
The citizens of Iron Keep, many only armed with tools instead of actual weapons, attack the Marauders, managing to break through their lines to reach the Templars.  But the Marauders are making quick work of the citizens and the Templars' numbers are nearly depleted.  A few dozen of them manage to retreat from the battle before the Marauders overtake the rest of the rebelling peoples and the remaining Templars.
NARRATOR (v.O.) (cONT'D)
With the short-lived rebellion crushed and the Templars all but wiped out, the Marauders were free to expand outward and conquer the rest of the unsuspecting kingdom.  The royal family was rounded up and executed except for the youngest princess and the youngest prince, hostages in case the people of Metallicus ever attempted another revolt.
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INT. iron keep, PALACE, throne room - nIGHT
Several members of the royal family, two of them crowned and obviously the King and Queen, are down on their knees in their own throne room.  Two figures stand aside as Marauders execute the royals.  One of the figures is Lord Dronjak, clad in armor very similar to that of the Templars we have seen so far only darker, holds two young children against their will, forcing them to watch, forcing them to watch their family be murdered. They are the young prince and princess.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
After Metallicus was fully under the control of the Marauders and their masters Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord, they began to bleed the kingdom dry.  Everything of value that the Marauders could get their hands on, from armor to gold, was stolen from the people and sent east.  East, to the kingdoms that had been conquered by the Draconians, which became a giant bloc of land that had fallen into lawless anarchy called the Badlands and run by the Marauders.
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eXT. iRON KEEP, COURTYARD - eVENING
Marauders smash their ways into houses, coming out with anything of value they can find.  Carts being dragged by horses with Marauders at the helm head eastward, loaded with the stolen riches of Metallicus.  
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
It has been ten years since the worst time in Metallicus' history.  For ten years the people of Metallicus have suffered at the hands of the tyrants and their Marauder servants.  For ten long years of never-ending oppression the remnants of the Templars of Steel have been forced to sit by as their brethren are beaten, robbed, and murdered.  But during those ten years we have not been idle.  We have been waiting and doing our best to rebuild our numbers.  Waiting for the tyrants and their lap dogs to grow lax and negligent as they no longer see any threat.  They shall learn of their error, but it will be too late as the Templars of Steel lead the people of Metallicus in a revolution to regain their freedom.  
A beat.
NARRATOR (V.O.) (CONT'D)
(a whisper)
Let your heart beat for the Revolution...
OPENING CREDITS
The opening credits for the movie show as the movie's theme "Templars of Steel" by HammerFall plays.  As the powerful song blares, various shots of what the narrator described are shown out of order; the Battle of Farpoint, the execution of the royal family, the Marauders beating and killing citizens of Metallicus, and the Templars being massacred in their own capital.
The Alexander Corporation Presents...
A Decepticon Liberation Front Production...
Directed by Ridley Scott
Written by Teufel
Templars of Steel
PATRICK STEWART - Lord Dronjak
DANIEL DAY-LEWIS - Magnus
JOHN MALKOVICH - Ravenlord
TOM WELLING - Joacim
JAMES FRANCO - Oskar
JENSEN ACKLES - Stefan
HUGO WEAVING - Johansson

JESSICA ALBA - Princess Rosen Elmgren
JESSE METCALFE - Prince Anders Elmgren
with
CHRIS HARMER as the Marauder In The Marketplace
The credits come to an end as does the song.

SUBTITLE: "Ten Years Later - The Badlands"
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EXT. badlands, FOREST - morning

This area of the Badlands does not appear to be as ominous as the name would suggest.  Four men are in a small clearing in the woods, each with fine looking fur pelts wrapped around their bodies.  Three sit on a large log in a row while the other sits on a rock.  He is marginally older than the other three.
JOACIM
(to the man on log)
What about Dronjak and the Ravenlord, Magnus?
JOACIM (Tom Welling) asks this question, one of the younger men (early 20s) on the log.  He is an attractive young man with short hair and a youthful face that is deceptively innocent.  He seems like he's teeming with energy and eager to do just about anything other than sit on the log.
MAGNUS (Daniel Day-Lewis), the older man on the rock (30s-40s), turns his gaze to Joacim.  Despite Magnus not being too old, he has a look about him as if he has done and seen more than most men of his age and that it weighs heavily on him at times.  After hearing Magnus speak, it is apparent the voice of the NARRATOR belongs to him.
MAGNUS
What about Dronjak and the Ravenlord, Joacim?
JOACIM
Well, I mean, I'm still a little confused.
Another one of the young men, (also early 20s), OSKAR (James Franco), speaks next.  His dark hair reaches down to the shoulders of his well-built, muscular body.  While only being a few months older than Joacim, Oskar looks like he is quite a bit more mature and calm than his comrade.
OSKAR
I think I know what Joacim's getting at.  Why did Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord do what they did?  
Magnus lets out a long sigh.
MAGNUS
To be honest, I didn't mention it because I, nor anyone else, really knows the answer to that.  And trust me, we have speculated about it a great deal over the years.  Lord Dronjak was so well loved... so well respected.  His blood, sweat, and tears had helped keep Metallicus and the Realm safe.  It's why his betrayal shocked and disturbed the Templars so greatly.  The Ravenlord... he was always a shady character, scheming in his tower and brewing foul spells at some odd hour in the night. But no one suspected he would betray us so...
The third man, also in his early 20's, on the log who has not spoken as of yet, STEFAN (Jensen Ackles), pipes up.  He is thin and scrawny, unlike the three other Templars and when compared to the handsome Joacim and Stefan, could be considered somewhat unattractive. The quiet young man's face is hard to read and he does not seem as outspoken as his comrades, having more reclusive mannerisms.
STEFAN
What of the Templars of Steel who aided Dronjak and the Ravenlord?
MAGNUS
They were not Templars of Steel.  At least, they weren't anymore by then.  The dozen or so that aided Dronjak were disgraced Templars, Templars who had mistreated civilians and prisoners during the wars before the Great War.  It's not hard to imagine them betraying us because of bitter feelings.
Magnus looks at the sky for a moment, able to tell the time from the position of the sun burning dimly in the heavens.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
We've rested long enough, we need to get back on the move if we want to make it to Kleinsburg before nightfall.    
OSKAR
I'm pretty sure we can handle anything that goes bump in the night, Magnus.  We're not little girls.  Well... Jaocim is, but that's what Stefan and I are here for.
The three younger Templars of Steel laugh.
MAGNUS
Just because you're Templars doesn't mean you should take every opportunity to fight.  It's not a matter of whether I trust your abilities or not, because I do.  But if a battle isn't necessary, there's no need to seek it out.  You all should remember that.
Joacim smiles.
JOACIM
Come now Oskar.  Let's not argue with Magnus.  If the old man is afraid of a few bandits, who are we to force him into something?
The others laugh.  Magnus stands and walks over to Joacim and smiles.
MAGNUS
'Old man?'  I'm not that old you little lamb.  At least, not so old I couldn't teach any of you a lesson in respect for your elders.
Joacim stands and gets in Magnus' face with a grin.
JOACIM
You've always boasted about how good  you are.  So I have no qualms with seeing if it's true.
MAGNUS
Don't tempt me, Joacim.  We have to head for Kleinsburg.  Besides, we're trying to not attract attention.  Getting in a fight with the Marauders isn't going to help us with that.
STEFAN
Sounds like he's just scared to me.
OSKAR
I'd have to agree with you on that one, Stefan.
While the others laugh Magnus doesn't respond to Stefan and Oskar's comments, just walking away.  Soon the three younger Templars of Steel follow him.
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EXT. prarie - NOON
The four Templars continue towards Kleinsburg, Magnus in the lead of the small party.  They wade through grass that reaches up above their hips.
JOACIM
So, remind me, why are we going to this village, Kleinsburg?
MAGNUS
I told you.  I'm not telling.
JOACIM
Care explaining to us why?
OSKAR
Does anyone else think Magnus made almost no sense?
MAGNUS
We'll be in Kleinsburg before dusk.  Haven't you ever heard that patience is a virtue?
JOACIM
No, but I'm sure you're going to enlighten us.
The three younger Templars laugh.  Magnus only cracks a small smile.
MAGNUS
Well, you're right, I am.  Patience is a virtue.  Impatience can lead to mistakes.  If you don't think things through, you could wind up dead, and so could anyone depending on you.  Remember that.    
 JOACIM
Another gem of wisdom from Magnus.
OSKAR
So, were you going to explain what all the secrecy is about or did you think changing the subject would make us forget?
MAGNUS
The reason why we're heading west is very important and not something I prefer to discuss with all these untrustworthy strangers around.
Joacim frowns and looks around.  
CUT TO:
Joacim's POV:
Nothing but a great expanse of tall grass.
JOACIM
But there's no one around for miles and miles.  Just us.
RETURN TO normal camera POV.
MAGNUS
Really?  Then who are those fellows hiding in the grass?
Several figures leap from hiding places in the grass.  By their grubby appearance and their ugly animal skins it is obvious they are Marauders.  All are armed with swords.  They begin to encircle the Templars, the lead Marauder breaking the circle to approach Magnus.
lead MARAUDER
Quite perceptive, not many see us when we hide, stranger.
MAGNUS
It's not that hard to spot a snake hiding like a coward in the grass, Marauder.  And it's not hard to smell the trademark stench of your ilk.
The lead Marauder snarls and spits.
lead MARAUDEr
(angry)
I was just going to take your gold and animal pelts.  But now I think I'll also take your intestines to decorate my home!
JOACIM
So... Magnus.  I believe earlier you were saying something about not seeking out battle if it's not necessary?
MAGNUS
Shut up, Joacim.
LEAD MARAUDER
Don't ignore me you filth!  
The lead Marauder raises his sword and charges forward at Magnus.  In the blink of an eye Magnus pulls a well-crafted blade from under his animal skins to deflect the Marauder's blow.  Magnus pushes forward, knocking the surprised Marauder off his feet and onto his butt.  This only further enrages him.  He climbs back to his feet and addresses the other Marauders.    
LEAD MARAUDER
Don't just stand there, slit their throats!
JOACIM
Easier said than done.
The Marauders tighten their circle around the Templars.  Joacim, Oskar, and Stefan pull their hidden swords from under their animal skins and surprise the Marauders by charging them head on.  Resistance is obviously something these Marauders have not had too much experience with in their past robberies.  
A Marauder makes a wide, sloppy swing, Joacim sidestepping the blade and smashing the hilt of his sword into the Marauder's nose.  The Marauder holds his broken nose as Joacim slams a boot into his stomach and hits him in the base of the skull with his sword's hilt, the Marauder dropping to the ground.  He turns, blocking a Marauder's blade.  
Stefan jumps back as a Marauder tries to cut him in two, then leaps forward with a swift slash that catches the Marauder in the chest.  As the wounded Marauder stumbles back Stefan rushes forward, kneeing him in the stomach and then the jaw as he bends over.  Another Marauder stabs at Stefan from behind, but Oskar steps in to deflect the attack and smash an elbow into the Marauder's nose and fatally stab him.  They don't have much time to rest as two more Marauders attempt to kill them.
The lead Marauder squares off with Magnus, but it is apparent Magnus is a great deal more skilled with a blade than this thief.  After a few seconds of hurried slashing and stabbing from the Marauder, each attack being deflected by Magnus' sword, Magnus ends the fight with a quick stab.
Oskar, Stefan, and Joacim have made short work of their opponents.  All four Templars regroup and there is only one Marauder left.  He looks at his fallen companions and then to the Templars.  The Marauder throws down his sword and runs the other way.  Joacim starts to give chase, but Magnus grabs his shoulder and holds him back.
JOACIM
What're you doing?  He's going to get away!
MAGNUS
We won, and he won't be anymore trouble for us.
OSKAR
Yeah, but I thought you wanted us to not draw attention to ourselves?  You can bet he'll tell his buddies, and they'll be on the look out for us.
MAGNUS
There's several dead bodies here and we don't have the time to bury them.  Even if we kill him, other Marauders will come across the bodies.  
STEFAN
(grave)
We should kill every Marauder for what they've done. He would've robbed us, killed us, and not thought twice about it. 
MAGNUS
Killing every single Marauder we come across won't right or avenge the tragedies committed in Metallicus.  Besides, by the time that Marauder tells any of his friends and they come back here we won't even be in the Badlands anymore.
JOACIM
Not in the Badlands?  Then where...  
Joacim gets a look of understanding.
JOACIM (CONT'D)
We're going to Metallicus, aren't we?
MAGNUS
(not responding to the question)
Come on.  We've wasted enough time here.  We need to keep heading for Kleinsburg.
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EXT. outskirts of Kleinsburg - NIGHT
The four Templars have reached the outer edge of Kleinsburg.  It is a humble town that doesn't look like it gets too many visitors and isn't extremely busy.
MAGNUS
We're here.
Magnus looks at the moon in the sky, using the position of the celestial body to tell the time.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
Just in time, too.
JOACIM
Just in time for what, Magnus?
MAGNUS
You'll find out soon enough.  Remember --
JOACIM
(interrupting)
Patience is a virtue.  Yeah, yeah I know. 
OSKAR
We're here.  You said you'd tell us, so spill it.
MAGNUS
Alright, alright.  Every Templar of Steel in the Realm is meeting in Kleinsburg tonight to plan the overthrow of the tyrants and the Marauders.
A beat.  They weren't expecting that.
STEFAN
All the Templars?
MAGNUS
All the Templars.
JOACIM
I don't understand.  You're afraid of being found out miles away from here, yet you expect hundreds of Templars of Steel gathering in one little village to arouse no suspicion from the Marauders?
MAGNUS
Kleinsburg is an insignificant village.  It sits on the border of Metallicus and the Badlands and was forgotten after it was pillaged and raped ten years ago.  There isn't a single Marauder for miles around and we can trust the people here not to inform them of our presence.  
JOACIM
We are going into Metallicus, aren't we?
MAGNUS
Yes, eventually we will be.  Now let's hurry.  
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INT. kleinsburg, town Hall - night
The four Templars enter the town hall where the citizens of Kleinsburg meet every so often to discuss affairs within their little village.  
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JOACIM'S POV:
The town hall is a tight fit for the hundreds of Templars of Steel present.  All are covered in animal skins like the four Templars the movie has featured, the well-crafted armor shown in the beginning of the movie ostensibly missing.  Most of the Templars are merrily talking amongst themselves, many friends who have not seen each other in several years.  They have formed a large circle in the building, a small space in the center clear.
RETURN TO normal camera POV.
STefAN
(to Magnus)
All the Templars?
MAGNUS
All the Templars.
OSKAR
My father and brothers were Templars.  I wonder if anyone here knew them?
MAGNUS
Yes.  I'll introduce them to you later, after the meeting.  Go ahead and join the group, we're about to start.
Magnus breaks away from the three younger Templars and disappears into the crowd of the remnants of Metallicus' shattered army.
JOACIM
Where do you think he's going, Oskar?
OSKAR
How should I know?  
STEFAN
Probably meeting old friends.
JOACIM
Probably.  Anyway, what're we doing standing around?  We're all Templars here, we should probably go introduce ourselves.
OSKAR
Well, of course.  That goes without saying.
While Joacim, Oskar, and Stefan join the large group of Templars and begin introducing themselves, on the other side of the room Magnus stops before a grizzled old man (60s - 70s) whose once blonde hair and dark beard have turned grey with specks of white.  In his prime he was a mighty man, but since then his muscle has degenerated and his belly is quite robust.  
GRIZZLED OLD MAN
(looking Magnus up and down)
Well, well, well.  Last time I saw ya you were five years younger, Magnus.  Probably still as dumb now as you were back then, eh?
The two old friends briefly embrace.
MAGNUS
It's been too long, Gunter. 
guNter
Yes it has.  Though it's hard to meet with other Templars.  You wouldn't believe how damn difficult it was to organize this little gathering.
Gunter looks around.
gunter (CONT'D)
Speaking of the little gathering, us catching up should probably wait at least until after this meeting.
Magnus nods.
MAGNUS
Of course.
gunter
I trust you were well informed of the situation before coming here?
MAGNUS
Yes.
Gunter
All right.  How about ya lead the meeting then?
Magnus smiles.
MAGNUS
My pleasure.
Gunter and Magnus move into the center of the town hall.  Gunter calls for silence.  The undivided attention of all present is on Magnus as the Gunter takes a step back.
A beat.
MAGNUS
Greetings, my fellow Templars of Steel.  As some of you may know, or more likely not know, my name is Magnus.  First, I'd like to thank the brave people of Kleinsburg for allowing us to meet here.  While none of them are present, I still believe we should honor them with a round of applause.
Every Templar claps loudly in thanks to the people of Kleinsburg despite their lack of a presence in the building.  The clapping gradually dies down after a few moments to let Magnus speak once again.
MAGNUS
You're all probably wondering why we have gathered here today.  Why every single Templar of Steel is meeting in this cramped building, an event unprecedented for ten long years.  My friends, this meeting is not a social call.  It is one of news of the utmost importance that not only concerns us, but the entire Realm.  
A brief silence as Magnus pauses.
MAGNUS (COnT'D)
(somber)
Ten years ago, our order, no... our entire kingdom... was betrayed after saving the entire Realm from the scourge of the Draconians.  Those we considered some of the most loyal to Metallicus turned their backs on us and brought their own kingdom into slavery.  Our people have been oppressed... robbed, beaten, and murdered.  And it has not been limited to the home we have been exiled from, Metallicus, but all across the Realm.  
Magnus pauses briefly to consider what he wants to say next, the frown on his face suggesting that it is something he doesn't consider pleasant.  When he speaks again, he seems to grow angrier with each sentence.
MAGNUS
The Badlands were once several prosperous kingdoms until they were conquered by the Draconians.  Despite us pushing them out of those lands, the damage they had done was too severe and they slipped into total anarchy, allowing the Marauder hordes who now rule Metallicus to spread their infestation into the Badlands.  And in those past ten years, we have let the Marauders and their masters, Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord, run wild and free.
A beat, the last comment causing some murmuring from the crowd of Templars, many not appreciating the last sentence of Magnus' words.  He holds his hands up in a defensive manner for a few seconds before speaking again.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
Do not misunderstand me, I am not blaming us.  We were shattered after the Battle of Farpoint and the betrayal at Iron Keep.  Beaten and few in numbers, there was little we could do to help the situation except bide our time.  We have strengthened our numbers from the few dozen who survived the massacre at Iron Keep to the hundreds that are gathered in this very building.  My friends, you have all been gathered here tonight to be told the time for waiting is over.  We will act, and act soon.      
Loud talking from the Templars interrupts Magnus, as does men yelling out questions and others saying things like "About time!"  Magnus holds up his hands and calls for silence, which he eventually gets.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
Please, silence, let me speak, it will probably answer your questions much quicker than you asking them individually.  You heard me right, we will be taking action after waiting for so long.  The Council of Steel --    
Magnus nods towards an older group of Templars, among them now is Gunter.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
-- has decided now is the time to strike and free Metallicus from the chains of oppression --  
The Templars cheer his words, then gradually quiet down to allow  him to continue.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
A few weeks ago in northern Metallicus the village of Boffen openly revolted against the Marauders.  Unfortunately, the revolt failed.  But even though it is a defeat, it can give us hope.  The winds of change are blowing, and it is something neither Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord, nor their Marauders seem to be catching onto.  The fires of rebellion are beginning to burn once again in the hearts of our countrymen--
He makes a wide sweeping gesture with both of his hands for emphasis.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
--all across the kingdom.  From Metallicus we have received family members and friends brave enough to leave their homes and seek us out to tell of the situation.  The people will no longer endure oppression, and after the revolt ten years ago, are ready to try once more.  Our strength is at a point where the Council of Steel deems it possible for us to make a difference.    
He gives a quick glance to Gunter and other Council of Steel members before quickly returning back to his speech.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
And the tyrants and Marauders do not suspect a thing.  As many of them spread to the Badlands to plunder it after all that could be taken had been taken from Metallicus, the Marauder strength and presence in Metallicus dwindled.  It has done so for ten years, as the tyrants and their army of brigands see no threat from inside or outside the kingdom.  While their numbers in Metallicus have dwindled, our numbers have increased, ready and eager to move into Metallicus at a moment's notice.  My comrades, consider this your moment's notice.  
JOACIM
(whispering to Oskar)
Can you believe this?  I've always wanted this moment to come... and it's finally happening.
Oskar nods and motions for Joacim to remain quiet.
OSKAR
(also whispering)
I don't want to miss a thing Magnus says...
MAGNuS (CONT'D)
From this city, which rests on the border of Metallicus and the Badlands, we will cross over into the kingdom that spawned our order, whose history and culture courses through our veins.  
While Magnus' face remains neutral, not betraying a thing, a hint of excitement can be detected in his voice as it begins to grow in volume.   
MAGNUS
In key villages, towns, and cities we will position ourselves and build up an army from the citizens of Metallicus willing to stand up and fight for freedom.  Then, exactly three weeks after tonight, we will simultaneously revolt all across the kingdom.  If all goes to according to plan, the Marauders will be caught completely off guard and promptly defeated.  With vital villages, towns, bridges, and cities under the control of the people of Metallicus, we can spread out and retake the rest of the kingdom if we keep up our momentum.  It will not be a simple task, but with enough effort, blood, and tears we will be victorious!  Lord Dronjak, the Ravenlord, and their lackeys will fall!   
Magnus takes a step back, signalling he is done talking.  Gunter steps forward as the gathered Templars wildly cheer Magnus words.  It takes them a few minutes to quiet down.
GUnter
Quiet, quiet.  Please... quiet!  Thank you.  I am Gunter, and am part of the Council of Steel.  For those of you unaware of where you will be sent, please remain here and the Council will tell everyone where they are going.
Gunter and Magnus return to the gathered Council of Steel members as the assembled Templars resume their wild cheering and begin elatedly talking amongst themselves, Magnus nodding every so often.
STEFAN
(loudly to overcome cheering)
Magnus was right for not telling us the reason we were coming hear.  If someone had overheard us, all would've been lost.
OSKAR
(also loud)
Well, of course that's obvious now.  What I'm more interested in is where do you think we're going to be sent?
JOACIM
(also loud)
We're with Magnus, no doubt about that.  And I'm betting after letting him make that speech, the Council of Steel is going to give him an important assignment.
OSKAR
(still loud)
Maybe Boffen?  
STEFAN
(still loud)
Why Boffen?
Oskar shrugs.
OSKAR
(still loud)
A little revenge?
JOACIM
(still loud)
No, he said Boffen was crushed.  It probably doesn't have much of a population that can rise up against the Marauders.  Besides, Magnus said all the areas would be of some kind of importance, and Boffen isn't.
OSKAR
(still loud)
True.
STEFAN
(still loud)
Marysdorf?
OSKAR
(still loud)
It is an important village...
JOACIM
(still loud)
We could waste time trying to guess where we are going to be.  Or we could just wait for Magnus to come over and tell us.
OSKAR
(still loud)
Speaking of the old man, here he comes.
Magnus finishes talking with Gunter, giving him a final, firm handshake before he walks into the crowd and heads towards his pupils.  Magnus makes his way through the crowd, all of the Templars shouting words of praise upon him slapping him on the shoulder.
JOACIM
(still loud)
That was a great speech, Magnus.
MAGNUS
(loud enough to overcome cheering; not responding)
Come, we're leaving.  
OSKAR
(still loud; upset)
But you said you'd introduce me to the other Templars!
MAGNUS
(still loud)
Yes, I remember, but I didn't know where the Council of Steel wanted to send us.  Now that I do, the Council and I agree it's imperative we reach our destination as soon as possible.  We'll rest a few hours before heading out.  It will be a quickly-paced trip, so you will use that time to rest.
JOACIM
(still loud)
Where are we going?  Marysdorf?
MAGNUS
(still loud)
No, though we will be passing through Marysdorf on our way to our final destination.  Iron Keep.

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INT. IRON KEEP, PALACE, THRONE ROOM - NIGHT
The usurped throne room of the royal family of Metallicus.  While it was only shown briefly in the beginning of the movie, the changes to it ten years later are evident.  The carpets have been ripped up and removed to reveal the cold stone that was underneath them.  The beautiful stained-glass windows may or may not exist, as someone has boarded them up and it is impossible to tell.  The only light, even when it is day, comes from the chandelier hanging from the ceiling and the torches along the walls.  While a decade ago there were many beautiful paintings, there is only a single one left, hanging on the wall above the throne that also touches the wall.  The occupant of the throne and the man in the painting are one and the same - the only difference being the man sitting in the throne is years older.  Besides his once jet black hair being replaced with barren scalp, the armor he wears is a black shade rather than the silver he wears in the painting.  He stares at the wall across the room, as if in deep thought.  The only door leading to the room, a large oaken monstrosity, creaks loudly as it is opened.  His concentration is broken by the noise and he looks up from his pondering to see who the intruder is. 
Two armed Marauders follow a man as all three enter.  The man (30s - 40s)is dressed in a silver cloak, the shoulders made of raven feathers.  He has a dark goatee that has not had to deal with the ravages of time yet and a rounded silver helmet on his head hides any hair he may have.  He turns to the guards and signals for them to leave.
MAN oN THRONE
(softly; tired)
Ravenlord... what do you want?
RAVENLORD
Ah, greetings Lord Dranjok.  I trust I did not interrupt anything of importance?
LORD DRONJAK (Patrick Stewart) appears to be a few decades older (50s - 60s) than the RAVENLORD (John Malkovich) and he seems to have much less energy.  He looks and acts as if he is having difficulty staying awake, although the Ravenlord's appearance seems to be rousing and irritating him.
LORD DRONJAK
What do you want?
RAVENLORD
Pleasantries were never your strong point.  There was a revolt.
LORD DRONJAK
(concerned)
A revolt?
He seems to become somewhat more alert at the mention of trouble.
RAVENLORD
Yes, in a little village called Boffen.
LORD DRONJAK
(annoyed)
I am familiar with that village.  I have lived in Metallicus all my life.  
RAVENLORD
A few hundred of its citizens attacked our forces there.  
LORD DRONJAK
And their revolt failed?
RAVENLORD
Yes.  They picked the worst day possible to revolt, the busiest day of the year.  A time when there are more Marauders there and passing through than at any other point in time.
LORD DRONJAK
If they failed, and failed pathetically, then why are you wasting my time mentioning it?  
RAVENLORD
They openly revolted.  You don't see it as a source of concern?
While it is apparent that the Ravenlord's presence is upsetting Dronjak, the sorcerer seems to have the same detestation at being around the other man.
LORD DRONJAK
Those that revolted were killed, and their families butchered, yes?
RAVENLORD
Yes, but --
LORD DRONJAK
(interrupting; irritated)
But nothing.  Maybe if they had succeeded, I'd be concerned, Ravenlord.  A failed revolt and a butchered people do not inspire more revolts.  I would've thought you'd learned that ten years ago.  Now, do you have anything that is actually important or is the only reason you're here is to inform me of every little piss-ant event that occurs in this third-rate kingdom?  
The Ravenlord is seething, looking as if he's having a lot of trouble holding back his anger.
RAVENLORD
(curtly)
Only the usual weekly report.
Lord Dronjak lets out a long, weary sigh.
RAVENLORD
(re: the sigh)
Do I need to remind you that these are important?  And it is you who scheduled this weekly report anyway.
LORD DRONJAK
(angry)
I don't need you to remind me what I ordered.  Now get on with the damn report.
Dronjak appears to be more astute now than earlier.  It seems like his anger is somehow revitalizing his tired body.
RAVENLORD
Very well.  In the...
The Ravenlord continues speaking, but his voice slowly fades until it is inaudible as the camera changes its view from the two tyrants to a close up of the painting of a younger Dronjak above the throne.  The eyes appear to be moving, something definitely not normal.   
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INT. iron keep, PALACE, secret passage - night
The Ravenlord's report can still be heard.  Standing on a large block of wood is a young woman.  That is all that can be discerned because of a lack of light in the secret passage, save a candle that sits on the floor near the wood, and light coming in through two small holes in the wall.  The woman's face is pressed close to them, and soon it is apparent that the woman is staring into the throne room through peepholes in the painting.  
She continues listening to the conversation of the two tyrants for a little longer, then slides a panel shut and no more light comes through from the throne room.
CUT TO:
INT. IRON KEEP, PALACE, THRONE ROOM - NIGHT
The camera is once again focused on the painting of Lord Dronjak, but the eyes no longer move.
CUT TO:
INT. IRON KEEP, PALACE, SECRET PASSAGE - NIGHT
The young woman quietly steps down from the block of wood, careful not to step on the burning candle and to make as little noise as possible.  She picks up the candle and heads down the passageway.  The camera follows her for a few moments, nothing eventful happening.  She stops, reaching her destination.  Her hand moves against a wall, not bothering to use the candle to light it up as her hand moves along the wall, obviously searching for something.  She presses in on one of the bricks, seeming to have found what she was looking for and takes a step away from the wall.
The wall silently begins to pull away, revealing a secret entrance into a well-furnished room.  The young woman enters -
INT. iron keep, PALACE, well-furnished room - night
-- and slides her hand along the brick wall of the room, pushing in another brick that causes the secret door to slide shut.  She turns around and gasps in surprise, a cloaked old man in his seventies (Cameo By Sean Connery) suddenly standing behind her.  His long white hair is thinning.  A rag is tied around his face hiding his eyes suggesting he is blind.  He smiles, as does the woman.
OLD MAN
Princess Rosen Elmgren... and where were you, young lady?
The Princess (JESSICA ALBA) smiles mischievously.
ROSEN
Nowhere, Eppu.
EPPU
Didn't I tell you to stay out of those passageways if I wasn't with you?
ROSEN
I was just looking around, nothing to worry about.
EPPU
Just looking around?  You were spying on Dronjak and the Ravenlord again, weren't you? 
ROSEN
(innocently)
Well... maybe for just a few minutes.
Eppu shakes his head.
EPPU
I told you not to do that for a reason, Rosen.  It's very dangerous.  If they caught you, they'd probably kill you.  
ROSEN
Oh, come on, Eppu.  You know those old tyrants need the last surviving members of the royal family.
EPPU
They'd still have your brother.
Rosen smiles as if it were a joke, but when she realizes Eppu is serious her smile fades.
ROSEN
Someone's got know what those tyrants' plans are.  It's a risk I'm willing to take, Eppu.
EPPU
Maybe, but that information won't do you any good if you're dead.
ROSEN
You told me yourself Dronjak and his sorcerer don't know about the secret passageways, right?
EPPU
Ten years ago they didn't.  For all I know they could've discovered the tunnels -- most likely they have discovered them.
ROSEN
It has to be done, Eppu, and you can't stop me from doing it again.
Eppu sighs, acting as if Rosen is not the first stubborn person under his care he's had to deal with. 
EPPU
No, I can't stop you.  All I can do is hope you listen to a voice of reason, Princess.  
The Princess places a hand on Eppu's shoulder affectionately and smiles.
ROSEN
I appreciate your concern, Eppu, and I respect your wisdom.  I know at times I don't act like it, but I truly do.  But this is something that I know has to be done.  The possible risks are outweighed by the possible rewards.
The old man smirks.
EPPU
Adamant and audacious.  Just like every other member of the Elmgren royal family I've met in my life.  Well, come on milady, your brother is waiting for the lesson to begin.  Your swinging needs a little more practice, Princess.  
ROSEN
Oh, please.  I could probably beat you with a sword any day.
Eppu cheerfully laughs
EPPU
Beating an old, blind man in a sword fight?  I'm sure that will frighten Dronjak.  
Eppu moves to the wall, seeming to have a good sense of his surroundings despite his handicap.  After a few moments of searching along the wall he pushes in the brick that slides the wall back, and he cautiously leads the Princess into the secret passage, the wall sliding shut behind them.
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EXT. MEtALLICUS, FOREST, CLEARING - NIGHT
The trees are covered in a layer of snow, the mix of white and green a beautiful sight.  Just looking at the snow covered plants and ground hints at how cold the area is.  Sitting at a struggling fire that would probably not be able to survive if fresh snow were falling or a strong icy breeze was blowing are Magnus, Joacim, Oskar, and Stefan.  Each seems to have an extra animal skin than when they were in Kleinsburg, clinging them tightly to their bodies.
JOACIM
It's been years since I've been here.  I forgot how damn cold it can get.
OSKAR
How could you forget?
MAGNUS
This is nothing, it's spring, almost summer.  You can complain about the cold when you've been out in the chill of Metallicus' winter.  
JOACIM
Oh, come on.  It can't be worse than this.
MAGNUS
In the winter, it doesn't matter how many layers of animal skins you have, Joacim.  You will always feel the cold.  It's a blessing and a curse.  
STEFAN
How so?
MAGNUS
A blessing because no other place in the entire Realm is as cold as Metallicus, except maybe the highest peaks of Tiranus.  
A blank look comes to Joacim's face momentarily.
JOACIM
That's a blessing... how?
MAGNUS
It's a natural defense, Joacim. Armies unprepared for the cold that have invaded Metallicus in the past have succumbed to the chill and the Templars who can stand the freezing winds.  But also a curse because we cannot enjoy bathing in the rays of the sun or roll around in a grassy knoll as many in other kingdoms can do.
OSKAR
(solemnly)
That blessing didn't help much with the Marauders.
Magnus shivers, perhaps at the cold or perhaps past memories brought up by the words of Oskar.
MAGNUS
More than you think, Oskar.  The Marauders were inside the city of Iron Keep, fairly protected from the cold as buildings blocked the winds.  When the Templars were forced to retreat --
He says the word "retreat" bitterly.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
-- we fled into the cold night.  The Marauders who followed us were not as used to the cold as us and many of them died from the cold and the rest were forced to return to Iron Keep.  Without the winter of Metallicus, none of us would be sitting at this fire, preparing to embark on an adventure that could free our people and our kingdom.
JOACIM
Oh.
OSKAR
Well put, Joacim.
Joacim laughs and punches Oskar.
JOACIM
Shut up.
MAGNUS
Get some sleep, if we move fast enough we can reach Marysdorf by midday of tomorrow.
Stefan follows the elder Templar's instructions, lying down and pulling the animal skins close to his body.  The others are not so quick to follow them.
JOACIM
We should head straight to Iron Keep.  We'll need as much time as we can get to train the people there.
MAGNUS
You're right, we'll need all the time we can get.  But going to Marysdorf is important and won't be a waste of time, I assure you.
With that, that Magnus lies down, Oskar and Joacim doing the same, each moving closer to the fire
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EXT. outskirts of marysdorf - noon
The four Templars stop a few hundred yards outside of the village in the field of a farmer who lives outside of Marysdorf, which is considerably larger than Kleinsburg.  Another difference between Marysdorf and Kleinsburg is there is actual traffic coming in and out of the village, though it appears to be mostly Marauders.  The camera shows the facesof Joacim as he watches a pair of Marauders enter the village.  Magnus notices Joacim's look.  
MAGNUS
(looking to Joacim but loud enough to address all)
I should warn you, that unlike Kleinsburg, there are Marauders in Marysdorf.  Do not attack them, do not cause any trouble.    
JOACIM
What does it matter if we bust up some Marauders?
OSKAR
We'll only be helping the Templars who will be here in a few days if we make it so they'll have a few less Marauders to deal with when the time comes.
MAGNUS
(impatiently)
Can't you two just do as your told and follow my orders?  You're both wrong.  If we kill Marauders and stir up their comrades in Marysdorf, that means they will be more alert and that will only cause trouble for our fellow Templars that will be here shortly after us. They'll have to deal with the mess and danger we created.  
Magnus looks away from just Joacim to now look at all three of the Templars.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
(more gentle)
I know standing aside as those thieving murderers run Metallicus is a hard thing to do.  I felt the way you did after Iron Keep.  By the Metal God, I've had to wait ten years to take action!  If I can wait a decade, is it unreasonable to ask you to wait a few weeks?
							JOACIM
Sorry, Magnus, I didn't think of it that way.  
OSKAR
No, it's not unreasonable, Magnus.  I too am sorry, I guess with the Revolution so close at hand, we're getting a little eager.  
MAGNUS
I understand that, but we need to wait.  Besides, it's not our task to free Marysdorf, so we should save our energies for Iron Keep.
STEFAN
Magnus, why are we stopping Marysdorf?  I mean, I know you said it was important, but what is so important that we have to stop here?
MAGNUS
I suppose telling you now would be better than telling you inside a village full of Marauders.  Inside Marysdorf is a tavern and the bartender's brother is from Iron Keep.  I've known the bartender for a long time and he is a trusted friend, and his brother is supposed to have information that is important to us.
STEFAN
Couldn't we just get this information in Iron Keep from the barkeep's brother himself?  It doesn't sound like we really need to stop in Marysdorf.
The other Templars do not seem to notice Stefan is more loquacious than usual.
MAGNUS
But I want that information as soon as possible, that way we can formulate some plans as he continue on our way to Iron Keep.  That will be less time wasted, and time is something we'll need plenty of in Iron Keep.  And there is also an old... friend... of mine that I need to see who fought alongside the Templars in Farpoint and Iron Keep.  Come on, enough standing around.  
Magnus turns and heads towards the village, Joacim and Oskar following.  Stefan looks at Marysdorf and his face shows a look of concern, as if he is worried about entering.  Despite whatever concerns Stefan may have, he is quick to follow his fellow Templars into the village.
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ext. marySDORF, COURTYARD - day
The four Templars are walking through the square of the village.  They are not alone, many people going about their daily lives.  But many of them seem cheerless, the presence of Marauders an obvious reason why.  The snow covered ground and buildings mixed with the lack of sun another possible reason.  The four Templars stop short of a tavern.  The camera follows Joacim's gaze to a sign on the wall of the tavern reading "The Inn".
JOACIM
'The Inn'?  What a creative name...
MAGNUS
Meet me here in an hour.
OSKAR
Going to see your friend?
MAGNUS
Yes.  
OSKAR
Could I come along?  I'd understand you not wanting a dolt like Joacim and quiet bore like Stefan, but since this friend of yours fought in Farpoint--
MAGNUS
(interrupting)
This friend of mine didn't know your father, Oskar. And  it has nothing to do with what we're doing, unless my friend decides to join our mission, which I'm hoping they will.
For a moment Oskar looks offended at Magnus' rejection, but he ostensibly shrugs it off.
OSKAR
Fair enough.  
JOACIM
What're we supposed to do for an hour?
MAGNUS
I don't know... wander around the village, see the sights, meet with a pretty young lady, buy something in the marketplace... I don't care, just as long as you stay out of trouble.
STeFAN
(muttering to himself)
Wander around in the open... that's a wonderful idea.
Magnus nods to the younger Templars and leaves them, disappearing into a row of houses.  The Templars watch where he disappeared to for a moment before walking towards the marketplace.
JOACIM
Wander around for an hour?
OSKAR
That's what Magnus said.
JOACIM 
I don't know about you, but if I have to watch these smiling and laughing Marauders for even just another five minutes, I may not be able to hold myself back.  
OSKAR
Just remember what Magnus said.
STEFAN 
We don't want to draw any attention to ourselves.  
joacim 
I know, I know.  Don't worry, I'll keep myself under control.  
OSKAR
Just remember that whenever you get the urge to lash out at these brigands, their day will come, just like those in Iron Keep and all over the kingdom.
STEFAN
You're right, Oskar, but we probably shouldn't be talking about this in the open...
JOACIM 
Let's try and find something to do.  
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EXT. marysdorf, home - day
It has not taken too long for Magnus to find the home in which his old friend resides.  It is in a fairly cramped area, homes close together.  The houses, including the one Magnus has stopped in front of, are not palaces.  They resemble windowless cabins, a lone chimney coming from the roofs spouting plumes of smoke as the people heat their homes to fight off the cold.  Every dozen houses or so have no smoke coming from their chimneys, too poor to afford wood.
Magnus looks apprehensive as he steps up to the door of the home.  He takes a deep breath and knocks lightly on the door.  A few moments pass and grows a little impatient, knocking harder.  He frowns as a few more moments pass and he is about to knock again when he hears movement inside the home.  The sound of locks being undone is heard on the other side of the door and it is opened with caution by the occupant of the home.  The occupant is a woman, a beautiful woman who is about the same age as Magnus (30s-40s). She is GWEN (Cameo By Monica Bellucci) 
WOMAN
May I...
She stops short as she looks at Magnus and her eyes go wide.
WOMAN
(shocked)
Magnus...? I don't believe it... is this some kind of dream?
Magnus smiles.
MAGNUS
No dream, Gwen.  It's really me, and I'm really here.
Gwen
(still shocked)
It's been so long...
MAGNUS
Ten long years. 
A beat.  They embrace.  
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EXT. marysdorf, marketplace - day
Joacim, Oskar, and Stefan have stopped in front of one of the marketplace's stands.  The marketplace could be described as not very busy.  Despite the larger ratio of citizens to Marauders, there are more Marauders in the marketplace than citizens.  Most are buying goods with stolen money, others are taking what they want from peddlers who do nothing, afraid of being beaten or murdered if they complain about the unfair treatment.  
At the stand the Templars are at the peddler is trying to sell some swords and daggers.  Oskar studies one of the daggers carefully and snorts.     
PEDDLER 
What?
JOACIM
You didn't make these yourself, did you?
PEDDLER
What's that supposed to mean?
OSKAR
It means only a Marauder would buy one of these cheap trinkets.
PEDDLER
(growing upset)
Trinkets?
A Marauder at the next stand hears Oskar's insult and looks him over, but ignores the insult as he is preoccupied with another peddler.  Stefan notices the Marauder looking at Oskar.
STEFAN
Perhaps insulting the Marauders isn't the best way to not attract attention...
JOACIM
Good point.  But still, these are shoddy.  They're not even made of steel!
The peddler looks at Joacim as if he were crazy.
PEDDLER
Sell steel weapons?  Do you really think anyone in Marysdorf could afford a quality weapon like that? Besides, iron is the best material the Marauders will allow us blacksmiths to make weapons with.  I'm doing the best with what I have.  
OSKAR
Not doing a very good job, even with just iron.
PEDDLER
If all you're going to do is insult me and not buy anything, get out of the damn way and stop blocking the view of other customers!
A few Marauders look in the general direction of the yelling peddler.  The three Templars notice the looks and decide to oblige with his demands, continuing down the aisle of stands.
JOACIM
Well, I guess insulting the peddlers is also not a good way to not attract attention, eh, Stefan?
OSKAR
You think?
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INt. Marysdorf, GWen's home - day
Despite the poor appearance of Gwen's home on the outside, the inside is fairly well furnished and very clean, yet it is still apparent Gwen is not a rich person.  Magnus sits at a small circular table and is alone, though not for long.  He smiles as Gwen enters the room with a glass in each hand.  She hands one to Magnus and sits down, taking a sip from her own.
MAGNUS
Thank you.
GWEN
I'm sorry it's just water, but goat milk isn't cheap or easy to come by here.
MAgnus
That's fine with me, I've never really liked milk anyway.
A beat of silence as Magnus takes a drink of the water.
GWEn
So...
Magnus sets his cup down and gives her his undivided attention.
GWEN (CONT'D)
What has been happening with your life the last ten years?  What brings you to Marysdorf after all this time?  
MAGNUS
In a few weeks we'll be beginning the Revolution.
It's apparent Gwen is too surprised to respond, so Magnus elaborates.
MAGNUS
You asked what I'd been doing for the past ten years?  I've been preparing.  We all have.
GWEN
We?
MAGNUS
The rest of the Templars of Steel.
Somehow, Gwen looks even more surprised.
GWEN
But... I thought...
Magnus smiles.
MAGNUS
That we'd been defeated?  Gwen, of all people I would've thought you'd never think a few brigands like the Marauders could extinguish the flames that burn within the hearts of all Templars.  Especially since it was something not even the hordes of Draconius could accomplish. 
GWEN
Well, I suppose, but it's just there hasn't been a single word about the Templars since Iron Keep.  To be honest...
She looks down.
GWEn (Cont'd)
I thought you had been killed.  
Her eyes begin to water.
GWEN (Cont'd)
After we escaped the ambush in Iron Keep and were separated, I looked for you.  I looked for all over Metallicus for two years before I gave u... before I ended up here in Marysdorf.  I... I waited for you for three more years, hoping you'd come to me and we'd be back together.  But... you never came.  That's when I gave up hope and considered you... dead...
An uncomfortable beat.
The silence ends as Magnus takes one of Gwen's hands in his own larger hands.
MAGNUS
(dejected)
We'd fled out of Iron Keep into unsettled territory of Metallicus to escape the Marauders.  The cold weather helped dispose of Marauders pursuing us and covered our tracks.  We then headed east and slipped into the Badlands.  That's where I've been for the last ten years, I haven't been in Metallicus since.  I wanted to come back for you, Gwen, but I was so busy.  We had to set up camps in the harshest of territories where no Marauders or regular people would discover us.  That alone took the better part of a year.  Then we set out to look for new recruits to help replenish our ranks for the days when they were needed.    
Magnus gives a small, sad smile. 
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
(still dejected)
I found a young boy not much older than ten who was known for causing the Marauders some trouble.  His family was in Metallicus and had sent him to the Badlands with an uncle.  But Marauders killed his uncle and he was on his own.  I found him in a little bit of trouble.  I took him back to our camps and he became my apprentice.  He's come a long way from that bony weak-looking scamp.  I think you'd like him.  I'd wanted to look for you in Metallicus, but... but there was no way I would take Joacim with me and I was afraid if I left him alone he'd try to visit his parents again.      
Tears stream down Gwen's cheeks.
GWEN
(sad; upset)
And after ten years you still couldn't take time to come back to Metallicus and find me?
MAGNUS
After six years of training to become a Templar, I knew Joacim would obey my wishes and not risk going home.  But...
GWEN
But what?  
MAGNUS
Gunter forbade my going to Metallicus.
Gwen is still crying as she pulls her hand away from Magnus' and slams it on the table.  The sudden outburst seems to cause Magnus to lower his head slightly with a look we have not seen on him before.  Shame.
GWEN
(enraged)
You bastard!  How many times had we fought at each others side?  How many damn times had we saved each other's lives?
Her anger seems to be running out of fuel as she breaks out into sobbing.
GWEN
How many times had we shared a kiss... a tender embrace... a bed?  And you just gave that up because that stupid, poor excuse of a man who's always hated me forbade you from coming to find me?  
MAGNUS
I know you don't like him, and I wanted to just punch him and come to Metallicus to at least tell you I was alright.  But he was right.  If I went to Metallicus and was captured, Dronjak knows me.  If I suddenly appeared in Metallicus after years of being gone it wouldn't take him and his treacherous sorcerer long to figure out the Templars were not as dead as they had believed.  I... I couldn't risk the Templars and the Revolution.  
GWEN
Damnit, Magnus!  You were my first love.  We were each other's first love!  We knew it was love when we first saw each other.  That's how I felt, and that's how I told you I felt.  I'm not even a citizen of Metallicus, I only fought with the Templars of Steel to be with you!  My mother... my father... my homeland of Oster... I threw that all away for you so we could be together!  Magnus... we did our fighting!  
She briefly grabs his hand for emphasis on the we part before letting go.
GWEN (ConT'D)
Tiranus, where we and the Templars overthrew E'in the Despot and restored the rightful monarchy... the Battle of Farpoint... the ambush in Iron Keep... I would've helped you with your damned Revolution!  But no, you listened to Gunter.  You know he despised me, the man has always had a prejudice against non-citizens of Metallicus!  And just because of his order, you gave up on our love?
MAGNUS
Not his order, but for any chance of freeing Metallicus.  It may not have been your homeland, but it is mine, Gwen!  I couldn't take the risk that I would destroy the only hope Metallicus had at being freed.  I understand you made sacrifices.  The time we had together were the greatest in my life, Gwen. 
Magnus pauses briefly as blood rushes to his cheeks as he slightly blushes.  It's quite apparent that Magnus is not used to being so emotional, and he's having some trouble coming up with the words to express himself.
MAGNUS
You're the only woman I've ever loved and the only woman I will ever love.  But I took an oath when I became a Templar of Steel that I would serve Metallicus, an oath I couldn't just ignore.  I'm not proud of... abandoning you, but I had to.  I still love you, though, Gwen.  
Magnus reaches for her hand once more, but Gwen violently moves it away.
GWEN
Why did you come here, Magnus?  Just to open old wounds in my heart?  Or does it have something to do with the damn Revolution?
MAGNUS
Yes... the Revolution.  I and a few other Templars will be going into Iron Keep to help all the citizens who are eager to free their lands of tyranny.  We could use your help, Gwen.  You were greater than many of the Templars, even at the order's prime.  After we free Metallicus and drive the Marauders out, we'll need strong and intelligent people like you to help rebuild the kingdom.  I'm willing to pick up where we left off.    
She looks like she's going to say something, but Magnus cuts her off.
MAGNUS (Cont'd)
I know I've hurt you, and I've hurt myself in the process.  Most likely, it is a wound that neither of us can ever heal from and it eats me up inside that I harmed you.  I know it wouldn't be easy, but I'm willing to make an oath in the name of the Metal God himself!  Not to the Templars and not to Metallicus, but to you.  I will never leave your side again and I will never hurt you again.  After the Revolution I will still want to help Metallicus, but in anyway you want.  If you want me to farm to feed the citizens, then I will put down my sword and wield a plow.  If you want me to sell trinkets, then I'll try my best to fast talk people.  By the Metal God, if you want me to be a jester, I will act like a clown to entertain the citizens!  Whatever you want of me after the Revolution, Gwen, I'm willing to do it.
A small smile reaches Gwen's lips even as she is still sobbing, obviously entertained by the idea of Magnus acting like a fool as a jester.  
GWEN
I could never stop loving you, Magnus.  Even though I've had feelings of animosity towards you, deep down I still loved you.  For the last ten years I've wanted nothing more than to be with you, and I still feel that way. 
MAGNUS
Then you'll once again stand by my side and help free Metallicus?
GWEN
No, I won't.  
MAGNUS
No?  I don't understand...
GWEN
I can't pick up a sword, Magnus.  I've tried hard to put all the fighting and killing I did behind me in the past where it belongs.  I was tired of the fighting a decade ago and I still feel that way.
Magnus reassuringly takes a hold of her hands in his own larger ones, and this time Gwen does not pull hers away.
MAGNUS
I wish it could be different, but whether you help us or not I still want to be with you.  Besides, as I said earlier, you've done your share of fighting for Metallicus and you're not even from this kingdom.   
GWEN
There's... there's another thing.  I don't know how you'll react to it, so I will just say it.  Magnus, after I realized you weren't coming back for me, a few years later I met another man and we married.  And... we had children, two of them.  A little boy and a little girl.  They're at the town's school right now.  Their father died a year ago of fever. 
MAGNUS
I'm sorry to hear about his death.  But you being a widow and having children doesn't change anything, Gwen.  I still want to be with you, and I don't have any problems about raising the children with you as if they were my own.      
GWEN
I wish you could just leave the fighting to the others, though I know you can't.
Magnus' only response is to walk over to her and kneel down next her, the two embracing and Gwen resting her tear-streaked face on his shoulder.
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Ext. marysdorf, mARKETPLACE - AFTERNOON
The three young Templars have finished looking at what the marketplace in Marysdorf has to offer, all three of them looking just as unimpressed as when they inspected the sword dealer's stand. They are even more anxious than earlier after spending nearly an hour around Marauders.
OSKAR
Well, this place is rather mind-numbing.
JOACIM
That's putting it mildly.
OSKAR
Thankfully, I think it's time for us to meet Magnus at the Inn.
JOACIM
Should've just went there an hour ago.
Oskar shrugs his broad shoulders.
OSKAR
I thought there would be more to look at here than poor quality swords and Marauders.
As the three Templars make their way out of the limits of Marysdorf's market they ignore the fiery glare of the sword peddler who is selling the less than impressive iron blades.  But they fail to notice another pair of eyes following them.  Across the marketplace a Marauder watches them, a thin smile on his face as he gently caresses his unshaven chin.
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INT. marysdorf, the inn, tavern - afternoon
The Inn is a noisy establishment that looks like it could use some repair.  The bottom floor is basically a tavern split into two major parts - the majority of the room is full of tables and chairs whose occupants are mostly drunken Marauders with only a few of the tavern's customers being the citizens the Marauders subjugate.  The rest of the room is taken up by the bar where several people sit, the three young Templars among them, and a stairway leading to the top floor.
JOACIM
And we thought the city's market was bad...
BARTENDER
Hey, you don't like it?  I'd be happy to throw you out of my establishment.
OSKAR
You call this dive an establishment?
Stefan
(snapphisly)
Do you two have to insult everything you come across?
bARTENDER
(growing angry)
Why you little --
Magnus steps into the scene between the two younger Templars that are harassing the bartender and owner of the Inn.
MAGNUS
(interrupting; stern)
Joacim, Oscar - shut up.  Otto - calm down. 
Otto's eyes go wide with surprise as sees Magnus, all traces of anger leaving his face which shapes an ugly smile to go with his ugly face.
OTTO
Ma--
Otto stops as Magnus shakes his head ever so slightly.  Otto looks confused at first but the bartender suddenly nods in understanding and smiles sheepishly.
OTTO
Sorry 'bout that.  I'd been told you'd be coming, but still... just a shock to see you back here in Metallicus.
MAGNUS
Okay, okay, it's good to see you too, but don't go and get over-sentimental on me, alright?
OTTO
Oh, sorry 'bout that.  Say--
The bartender nods his head towards the flight of stairs.
OTTo (cont'd)
--You ready to meet my brother?
MAGNUS
Lead the way, Otto.
Otto tugs at the shirt sleeve of another bartender, telling him he will be gone for a short while.  The owner of the Inn leads the Templars up the stairs.  The Marauders are too busy playing card games and getting drunk to notice or care.  The five men pass a drunken Marauder who stumbles his way down the stairs.  
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INT. mARYSDORF, THE INN, second floor, hallway - afternoon
The top floor is just as unimpressive as the rest of the city, just a hallway and doors that lead to rooms being rented out to people passing through Marysdorf or too drunk to go home.  Otto stops in front of a door near the end of the hallway.  The inn's owner produces a latch of keys from his pocket and cycles through several them until he finds the one that unlocks the door.  They enter, Otto leading the way.
otto
This is my room--
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int. marysdorf, the inn, second floor, otto's room - aFTERNOON
OTTO (coNT'D)
Best in the whole place.
JOACIM
That's not saying much.
Otto doesn't respond, either not hearing the comment or ignoring it.  But while Joacim was rude, he is also correct as the room is really nothing to look at, hinting at the poorer conditions of the other rooms if this is indeed the best in the Inn.  The wooden floor is full of knots and lacks any carpeting.  There are few furnishings, one of the few being a chair occupied by a man.
Otto smiles at the sign of the man in his room and the two shake hands.
OTTO
Magnus, meet my brother, SKIPP.  Skipp, this is the Templar I told you about.
Skipp climbs out of his seat to shake hands with Magnus and the other Templars who introduce themselves.
SKIPP
It's an honor to meet you.
MAGNUS
It is also an honor to meet with you.  We are indebted to you for the courage you've displayed by agreeing to meet us.
Skipp waves the idea of being indebted to him.
SKIPP
Don't mention it, it's my pleasure.  Anyway, the reason you're here is Wolfgang.
MAGNUS
Wolfgang?
SKIPP
Yeah, Wolfgang is the person you want to look for in Iron Keep.  He's pretty much the man in charge of the Revolution in the capital.  You know, organizing, spreading the word, training.  He was training to be a Templar when the King was overthrown, got stuck in Iron Keep.
Skipp shrugs with a sigh.
SKIPP (ConT'D)
When you get to Iron Keep, just ask for Wolfgang.  Some of his men will track you down after they find out you're nosing around, but when they find out it's you there won't be a problem.  That's about it I guess.
Joacim frowns, shaking his head as he takes a few steps towards Otto's brother.
JOACIM
(irritated)
That's it?
Skipp looks confused, as if Joacim had just asked a difficult question.
SKIPP
Huh?
JOACIM
A name, that's what we made this detour for?  We could've just found out about Wolfgang in Iron Keep and we would have gotten there sooner, too!
Magnus sighs and firmly grips Joacim's shoulder and gently pulls him a few steps away from Skipp.
MAGNUS
You'll have to forgive Joacim, he's young and rude.  However, I was also hoping for a little more information about the situation in Iron Keep and the strength of the Marauders there.
SKIPP
Oh, sorry 'bout that.  Wolfgang and the others were expecting you to be informed about that in Iron Keep so they didn't tell me too much, but I'll tell you what I know.
Skipp takes a moment to sort his thoughts out as he searches through his memory for anything that could be of help to the Templars.
SKIPP
Well, there aren't as many Marauders in the capital as there used to be.
Skipp stops to snort indignantly to himself.
SKIPP (CONT'D)
'Course there aren't, they've already taken most of our money and most of our food.  A lot of them are gathering at the northern border to start raids into the kingdom of Tiranus, which is bad news for them since their civil war is just now dying down and both sides in the kingdom are pretty weak.
MAGNUS
Then hopefully the Revolution will not only free us, but allow our northern neighbor time to heal herself.
SKIPP
Like I said, there aren't as many Marauders, but I don't know the exact numbers.  But since they've been sitting around in the capital for several years without too much trouble from us I'd bet they're pretty bored and aren't completely on guard.  So it shouldn't be any trouble for you to get into the city.  Unless you look like you have money or something valuable you're usually left alone.
Magnus nods as he once again shakes hands with Skipp.
MAGNUS
Thank you, Skipp, you've provided us with invaluable help.
JOACIM
How many citizens have joined the cause in Iron Keep?
SKIPP
I don't know for sure, Wolfgang never told me--
JOACIM
(interrupting)
Yeah, I know, it's a recurring theme with you.
Skipp ignores Joacim's interruption and finishes answering his question.
SKIPP (CONT'D)
--how many people joined up, but from friends also helping with the Revolution that are in higher positions than me I've heard estimates in the hundreds.
OSKAR
Whatever the number, it will grow by leaps and bounds when we get there.
SKIPP
Templars will inspire a lot of recruits and a great deal of hope.
MAGNUS
Are you coming with us, Skipp?
SKIPP
I was planning to, but I've decided to stay here and help Otto with the Revolution in Marysdorf.
MAGNUS
Good, someone needs to be looking out for him.
OTTO
Hey, hey -- I'm right here.
Magnus smirks and pats Otto on the back.
MAGNUS
So you are, Otto.  So you are.
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INT. marysdorf, the inn, tavern - afternoon
After leaving Skipp in Otto's room, the Templars and Otto have descended the staircase, once again passing by the drunk and now unconscious Marauder at the bottom of the stairs, the group drifting towards the bar.
OtTO
Sure you don't want to stay for a good luck drink?
MAGNUS
No, we have to leave as soon as possible.
Stefan stares down at the dirty wooden floor.
STEFAN
(whispering)
About time we left this damn place.
OTTO
Fine, guess I'll just have to drink enough for all of us.  Goodbye my--
The owner of the Inn's words are cut short by a loud feminine scream.  All eyes focus in on the source of the noise.  At one of the tables occupied by Marauders one of the Marauders has seized a beautiful barmaid, forcing sloppy, drunken kisses upon her.  He quickly moves onto groping her bosom and loins, forcibly setting her atop his group's table and continuing the molestation while she screams and his fellow Marauders laugh at the sight.
JOACIM
That sick bastard...
Joacim begins to pace towards the disturbing spectacle, but Magnus grabs a hold of his shoulder.
MAGNUS
What do you think you're doing?
STEFAN
We don't want to attract attention...
Magnus' apprentice turns and swats away the grip of his mentor.
JOACIM
(growing livid)
I am going to help her!  Don't tell me you're going to sit by while that pig rapes her?
MAGNUS
No, we won't sit by while he rapes her.  We'll leave.
Joacim's eyes go wide and his right hand tightens into a fist as his anger continues to grow.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
(somber)
I don't want to, but Stefan is right.  We can't risk the Revolution.  If I have to choose between helping her and risking the Revolution and freedom of the entire country or not helping her and keeping the risk of exposing us low, then with the Metal God as my witness, I'll choose the latter.  The freedom of Metallicus is more important than one barmaid.
Otto speaks up as he watches the source of the argument.  He wants to smooth things over but he's also worried about what is going on in his establishment.
OTTO
'ey, I'll take care of this, you fellas just take this time to slip out, alright?
JOACIM
As if an overweight weakling like you could stop them.
Magnus begins to say something, he himself growing angry at Joacim's continuing insolence, but stops when with quick steps Joacim heads to the table where the barmaid is being raped.   
MAGNUS
(muttering)
Damn fool.
Joacim grabs the Marauder that is forcing himself upon the woman and pulls him off of her and off the table.  The drunken brigand demands an explanation and Joacim replies with a punch that floors him.  The young Templar helps the lady off of the table and with tear-filled eyes she makes her way to the safety of Otto and the other Templars.  Everyone in the tavern stops and now pay attention to just Joacim, especially the Marauders at the table he's standing near.  One of the drunken Marauders at that table who had been laughing only a minute ago stands and violently throws his cup down and advances on Joacim, several Marauders flanking him.
DRUNKEN MARAUDER
(slurred; angry)
Who do you think you are? 
DRUNKEN MARAUDER 2
(slurred; angry)
You just made your last mistake you stupid little kid.
Joacim only sneers at the Marauders and their threats, his contemptuous smile only serving to further fuel the drunken rage of the Marauders.  With an enraged yell Drunken Marauder charges forward, bringing his arm back for a punch.  But Joacim easily blocks it, driving his knee into the man's abdomen and digging his elbow into the base of the Marauder's skull.  While Joacim is naturally a better fighter than these bandits they are also drunk, greatly reducing their combat effectiveness.  Drunken Marauder 2 watches his comrade easily defeated and takes his place, drunkenly running at Joacim.  The young Templar sidesteps the charging Marauder and grabs one of his arms, whipping him towards the table, the man's own weight causing him to smash through the wood. 
OSKAR
At least he isn't getting his head kicked in.
MAGNUS
Thank the Metal God for small favors.
More Marauders begin to edge closer towards Joacim, continuing to grow infuriated at how easily he is beating their comrades.
DRUNKEN MARAUDER 3
I've had enough of this!
Drunken Marauder 3 draws a sword, growing impatient with a type of fighting that doesn't seem to be working very effectively.  He quickly begins to draw closer to Joacim as he shoves his way to the front of the battle.  Magnus spots the sword and sighs.
MAGNUS
(frustrated)
Damn, we have to help him.
As Joacim is busy beating away at another opponent Drunken Marauder 3 has reached the front, now charging the young citizen of Metallicus, with his sword raised high above his head.  Jaocim kicks a chair up into his hands, bringing the wooden seat up to block the blow.  The blade slices halfway through the chair before coming to a halt, but it stops nonetheless.  Joacim violently jerks the chair, knocking the sword from his opponent's hand, and then swings it upward to collide with Drunken Marauder 3's jaw and knock him unconscious.
JOACIM
(disgusted)
I should've known you thugs wouldn't be able to fight a fair fight.
Reaching under his animal hides Joacim produces the sword he used earlier, holding it aloft in a manner that is an open challenge to the Marauders.  They are happy to oblige as the majority of them pull out their assortment of poorly made swords and daggers.  The Marauders begin an advance, but come to a cautious halt as Magnus, Oskar, Stefan, and their blades approach them.
OSKAR
We thought it looked like you could use some help, Joacim.
JOACIM
Looks can be deceiving.
MAGNUS
Just shut up, Joacim!
Just as the drunken Marauders begin to regain some of their courage the sound of a great crash fills the tavern as the door is kicked in.  A dozen sober Marauders pile into the tavern, led by the Marauder (Cameo By Chris Harmer) that had been watching the young Templars in the marketplace.  He looks about the room, rage showing on his face as he notices the downed Marauders near Joacim's feet.  The lines of anger grown even deeper as he points in the direction of Magnus, Stefan, and Oskar.
Marauder from the marketplace
Surrender right now and I may kill you quickly and painlessly later!
To the Templars it may look as if he is just pointing in their general direction, but when the camera zooms in on Stefan from the Marauder's position it becomes quite apparent that he is pointing specifically at Stefan and mainly addressing him.  Stefan knows this and winces at the sight of the Marauder and at his threat, briefly glaring at Joacim as if to blame him.
marauder FROM THE MARKETPLACE
Did you really think you could come back to Marysdorf without anyone noticing, Stefan?
All the Templars except Stefan look shocked at the Marauder's use of their comrade's name.
MAGNUS
How does he know you?
Magnus' question finally earns the rest of the Templars the Marauder's attention.
MARAUDER FROM THE MARKETPLACE
Who are these riffraff you're with, Stefan?
JOACIM
Who are you calling riffraff?  You look li-- ugh!
Joacim is cut off mid-sentence as one of the drunken Marauders takes this time of confusion as an opportunity to try and disarm Joacim.  The attempted tackle is not much of a success since Joacim is knocked back against a wall, not the to the ground.  The Templar grunts in pain but is quick to fight back, driving a knee into his opponent's stomach and uppercutting him.  The Marauder falls back, but reaches out for something to grab, the closest thing being Joacim's animal skins.  As the Marauder hits the floor he takes the hides with him, pulling them all off Joacim in one clean sweep.  Several shocked gasps and then silence is the response to this.
RANDOM MARAUDER
I don't believe it!
RANDOM MARAUDER 2
(fearful)
I'd recognize that armor anywhere!  H-he's, he's--
random citizen of marysdorf
(interrupting; joyful )
--a Templar of Steel!  He's a Templar of Steel!
Joacim is indeed a Templar, and with his animal skins removed a good look at the armor he wears is available.  It is the same armor that was shown in the beginning of the film though now we can get a closer examination.  The armor looks as if it was crafted specifically for Joacim's body.  It fits close to his body to offer better mobility and allow him to have more speed in battle, so far something that has worked effectively as we have seen.  
STEFAN
(muttering)
This just keeps getting better and better.
There is an uneasy calm in the tavern as the Marauders are still shocked and frozen at the presence of a Templar of Steel, even more so when they realize the other three men who are armed and come to Joacim's aid are most likely also Templars.  Deciding to use this hesitation to their advantage, Magnus yells orders to his comrades.  
MAGNUS
Now!
On their leader's command Stefan and Oskar charge the Marauders, Magnus leading the attack.  Joacim retrieves his animal skins and hastily wraps them around his body before following the lead of his fellow Templars.  With surprise on their side they begin to push the Marauders back who are still dealing with the idea of a group of Templars being in this tavern in some little town.
MARAUDer frOM THE MARKETPLACE
Stay and fight!
Despite his orders a few Marauders flee the tavern through the remains of the door, more afraid of facing a Templar than facing their superior.
MAGNUS
Keep it up!  We need to get outside!
They do just that, keeping their momentum up.  With several Marauders dead or unconscious already, the Marauder line begins to weaken severely.  The fighting is fast paced and it's obvious that despite the superior numbers of the Marauders the Templars are winning.  
Stefan dispatches an opponent with a well placed stab of his sword, bringing him to face the Marauder from the marketplace.
MARAUDER FROM THE MARKETPLACE
What, now you think you're a Templar?
STEFAN
Maybe.
MARAUDER FROM THE MARKETPLACE
You and your friends may have the others fooled, but not me you traitor.
STEFAN
I stopped being a traitor when I left the Marauders.
The Marauder's only response is to swing at Stefan who blocks the sword and pushes, forcing the Marauder back a step.  Stefan slashes forward at his opponent who manages to deflect each attack but is still getting forced back, gradually drawing closer to the door his men had kicked in.  Tired of being on the defensive the Marauder raises his sword for a mighty downward swing but with lightning speed Stefan rushes forward and thrusts his sword through the belly of the Marauder.  The Marauder screams in pain as Stefan pulls the sword out of him and the Marauder falls dead to the ground.  Stefan has a look of satisfaction, obviously some bad blood had been between him and the dead man.  The camera pulls out as Stefan contemptuously spits at the corpse as a view of the rest of the fight is available.  Many of the Marauders have been slain and those that remain are retreating, the last remains of their courage dispersing as their leader lies dead at Stefan's feet.
JOACIM
What was that about, Stefan?
STEFAN
Now's not the time to explain it.
JOACIM
You don't get off that easy, you can't just--
OSKAR
Who are you to talk, Joacim?
As the younger Templars bicker Magnus guardedly makes his way to the remains of the door.  By the time he reaches the doorway he can't take much more of the arguing.
MAGNUS
(interrupting)
Enough!  We have to get out of this tavern and out of this town before the Marauders get a chance to regroup and swarm us, and we are not going to do it with you bickering like children!  So save the arguing for later and just get moving.
Joacim is about to say something but he catches a look from Magnus and decides to keep quiet.  The other Templars join Magnus at his position near the doorway, the elder Templar cautiously peeking his head around the corner on the lookout for Marauders.
CUt to:
magnus' poV:
The outside of the Inn, which was fairly bustling with people and activity earlier, is now deserted save for a lone Marauder who had escaped the tavern but succumbed to the fatal wounds he had suffered.  The citizens who usually walk through the area are now at their homes, following the orders and threats of the fleeing Marauders.
RETURN TO normal camera POV.
Magnus brings his head back inside the Inn and nods to his comrades.
MAGNUS
It looks like it's clear, but it won't stay that way for long, so we have to move fast.  Remember that it's more important to get out of Marysdorf than it is to kill every Marauder we come across.  Is that understood?   
The others acknowledge, even Joacim who acquiesces with a curt nod.  The Templars dash out of the tavern, Otto yelling after them.
otto
Good luck!
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int. mARYSDORF, COURTYARD
As the Templars reach the deserted center of the city Magnus briefly stops, taking a quick look around.  With an eerie silence about, the shriek of a dark raven seems almost deafening as it echoes.  Magnus watches with a frown as the raven circles above the tavern a few times before finding a perch.
MAGNUS
(muttering)
That can't be good.
Magnus turns his attention away from the raven and points towards a dark and empty alley.  
MAGNUS
That way!
The Templars quickly make their way into the dark alley and don't look back as the they continue on.  The camera remains in the courtyard of the city for a few minutes until a few dozen Marauders come into the area.  Several of them split off and head in several directions while the majority of them surround the Inn.  
lEAD MARAUDER
Don't enter unless I say so!  We'll either starve them out or burn the entire building down!
The Marauders follow their leader's orders, staying in their positions, incorrectly thinking that the Templars are holed up inside of the Inn while they actually get closer and closer to the outer edges of the town.
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EXT. forest, clearing - night
It would take a stretch of one's imagination to call this part of the forest a clearing in the woods.  While there is some space between the trees it isn't anything very large and it looks as if someone only spent a few quick minutes cutting the snow-covered vegetation, leaving quite a bit still around, which is exactly what has happened, the Templars only clearing it up enough for them to lie.  Oskar is sitting on the ground and leaning on a tree while Joacim uncomfortably sits on the snow covered foliage.  Stefan is also leaning against a tree albeit while he's standing and staring at the ground, and Magnus is also on his feet pacing in deep thought.  Their animal skins are clasped tightly around them to fight off the chill of the snow and night.  There is no fire so the only source of illumination is the dim light provided by the full moon, which is just enough to distinguish between the four Templars.    
Magnus continues pacing and curses to himself, looking quite frustrated.
JOACIM
You sure we can't build a fire?
The elder Templar stops, only seeming to become more aggravated by the sound of Joacim's voice.  
MAGNUS
You don't have the right to complain about anything after what you did back at the Inn.  Besides, anyone searching in the woods might spot a fire.
JOACIM
What?  I saved a woman from being raped, we killed a few Marauders, and got out of there alive and unhurt.  
Magnus' loses his temper, his anger exploding as he turns to face Joacim.
MAGNUS
(exasperated)
You idiot!  How many times do I have to explain it to you?  What you did not only failed to help us, but you've jeopardized the entire Revolution!  Before this evening the Marauders and their masters at Iron Keep had no idea the Templars still even existed, we had the element of complete surprise on our side.  In a few days the word will spread throughout the kingdom, a few days later throughout the entire Realm.  Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord aren't fools, they'll have to suspect something and they'll be on their guard, and because of that more Templars and citizens will die in the Revolution and it may fail altogether.         
Magnus sighs and shakes his head.
MAGNUS (coNT'D)
I knew you were a little brash, Joacim, but I thought I could trust you.  But you couldn't just follow my order, I hope you can live with the consequences because I know if I were in your place, I wouldn't be able to. 
It is Joacim's turn to be angry as the Templar leaps to his feet.
JOACIM
You're damn right I didn't follow your order!  I didn't join the Templars just to watch those filthy pigs rape my people!  
Magnus takes several steps to come uncomfortably close to Joacim and he stares into his eyes.
MAGNUS
Is that why you attacked that Marauder?
JOACIM
(bemused)
What do you mean?
MAGNUS
You've been wanting to fight the Marauders for weeks now, and you were especially vocal about the matter when we entered Marysdorf.  I think maybe you were just looking for an excuse to attack them.
JOACIM
That's a lie! I-- 
OSKAR
(interrupting)
I think you two may want to calm down.  Yelling at each other isn't going to accomplish much.
Joacim gives Oskar a mean look that could melt snow.
JOACIM
Shut up, Oskar.  
He turns back to Magnus, Oskar now starting to look upset himself.
JOACIM (CONT'D)
I did what was right, Magnus, what I know was right.  How can you expect me to sit by, to turn my back while a fellow citizen of my kingdom is raped by some brigand?  You can't ask me to do that, and you can't put the blame on me.  Hell, even if I had followed your orders, those other Marauders would've went after Stefan and we'd still be in the same mess.  
Stefan looks up at the mention of his name and Joacim flashes him a glare.
JOACIM (CONT'D)
A former Marauder, you damned traitor.  And you say you can't trust me, Magnus?  I bet he isn't even from Metallicus!
MAGNUS
If he was a traitor I doubt he would've been fighting for his life back at the tavern.  Though I still want an explanation, Stefan.
Stefan sighs and shrugs, looking to each other Templar in turn.
STEFAN
Well, I'll make it brief.  I'm not from Metallicus, I was really born and raised in the Badlands.  My family was pretty poor so I joined the Marauders when I was ten since they had it better than anyone in the Badlands.  After a year I couldn't handle it anymore and left, so they killed my parents.  That's when a Templar helped me escape the Marauders and I lied about where I was from so I could become a Templar.
OSKAR
That's a little brief, isn't it?
STEFAN
(dejected)
I'd rather not get into the grim details and relive the memories as little as possible.   I'm sure Magnus can understand that.
Magnus solemnly nods.
MAGNUS
But you lied to us and hid your real identity.  How can we trust you after that?
STEFAN
I don't know, you probably can't.  But I hate the Marauders, and you can count on me doing anything that hurts them, and being a faithful Templar is the most I will ever be able to do to hurt them.  
Oskar's anger has died down a little without anymore antagonizing from Joacim and he tries to help diffuse the tense situation.
OSKAR
Well, that sounds fairly reliable.
Joacim curtly nods, not quite as forgiving as Oskar.  Nonetheless, he is ready to let the argument die, returning to the spot where he was sitting and drawing the animal hides tightly around his body.  Magnus looks mentally and physically tired, looking a decade or two older in the poor lighting than he really is.  He waves his hand as if brushing off the animosity that had been building up.
MAGNUS
Get some rest, we'll need it.  No doubt they'll send out search parties when they get organized, try to hunt us down.  We want to be at Iron Keep before they get here.  So get to sleep.
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EXT. foREST, CLEARING - late night
A few hours later in the same clearing.  All four of the Templars are asleep, getting in as much rest as possible before they have to continue on their journey to the capital.  They are all leaning against a tree, keeping the upper half of their body free from the snow and plants.  As the Templars sleep as comfortably as one can be expected to while in the snow with no fire, the camera moves past the three younger Templars to focus on Magnus, who is lightly shaking not from the cold but from a dream.

Beginning of FLASHBACK SEQUENCE
Cut to:
EXT. IRON KEEP, city gates - ten years ago - AFTERNOON
Outside of the magnificent city walls of the capital of Metallicus the kingdom's army returns victorious from their final battle with the Draconians a few weeks ago.  But that victory has obviously come at a heavy price as the Templars of Steel left thousands strong and now return with only several hundred Templars remaining.  Many of the kingdom's soldiers are covered in blood soaked bandages and others aren't even wearing armor, preferring to risk the winter of Metallicus rather than aggravating their wounds.  
The camera follows the ranks of Templars as they trudge through the snow, moving from the rear to the front to show the wounded and the overall demoralized attitude of everyone.  Despite having won the heavy losses have left no one with any urge to rejoice.  As the camera reaches the front we notice that those leading the army are on horseback, horses being animals that haven't appeared in the movie until now.  In the lead we can see three familiar albeit younger figures: Magnus and Gwen who are riding beside each other and holding hands, and Gunter who is at the very front.  
The army draws closer to home as they near the gates, which are wide open.  The Templars think nothing of this as they pass through the gateway into home.
CUT TO:
Ext. iron keep, courtyard - afternoon
While the open gates did not bother any of the soldiers, they are certainly disturbed now.  Waiting for them in the capital is... nothing.  The streets that are usually filled with merchants and a various assortment of peoples, even in the freezing winter, are nowhere to be seen.  Not a single soul walks through the center of the city and it causes an instant murmur among the tired and dejected ranks.
Magnus' lover offers him a concerned look.
GWEN
Something definitely isn't right.
MAGNUS
(confused)
I know, it's never empty like this, even on a holiday.
Gunter agrees with them, always a rare happening, and orders the Templars to come to a halt, a command that is follow with skilled haste.  
GuNTER
All the reasons the city is deserted aren't good.  We'll march to the palace and see if we can find any answers.  If we don't find anybody there we'll secure it and then search the city brick by brick until we get some damn answers.  Magnus, I want ya to--
An arrow streaks through the air, hitting one of the injured and armor-less Templars in his unprotected chest.  His scream interrupts Gunter's train of thought and brings all other activity to a halt. As soon as his dead body hits the snow more arrows are in the air, striking at more unfortunate targets.
TEMPLAR 1
From the buildings, archers!
TEMPLAR 2
Marauders!  It's the Marauders!
There is a great commotion as Marauders pile out of all the surrounding buildings with a various assortment of ragtag weapons that somehow look even worse now than their arsenal will in ten years.  The battle weary Templars are taken by surprise, none of them, even the aged Gunter, having ever seen an enemy in the kingdom of Metallicus, much less its capital.  Hundreds of Marauders have come out of the buildings and charged the Templars, forcing them back quickly.  
GUNTER
Fall back!  Fall back!  Fall back and regroup!
An arrow digs its way into the heart of Gwen's horse, the snow white animal letting out a death cry before collapsing, sending her tumbling to the ground.
Magnus
Gwen!
He brings his horse to gallop, drawing his sword and slashing the chest of a Marauder near Gwen.  Despite the painful fall she is quick to her feet and fights her way to Magnus, climbing onto his horse and holding onto him tightly as he rides away to join the Templars.  By now they have regrouped out of the range of the Marauders' archers and are fighting back, inflicting heavy losses on their less disciplined and poorly equipped enemies.  Soon it is the Marauders who are being pushed back, Templars using the shields of the fallen Marauders to better protect themselves from the hail of arrows.  Dozens of Templars manage to break through the enemy lines and enter buildings from which archers are firing their arrows. Many of the archers are promptly slain and the Marauders' major advantage is gone. 
Just when it seems as if the Marauders are at the breaking point they let out a collective cry for joy.  For a moment the Templars are perplexed, but sadly understand as a myriad of Marauders flow from street corners, reinforcing their comrades and causing the vastly outnumbered Templars to start falling back once again.
Magnus fights from atop his horse, but he is pulled off by a few Marauders and he hits the ground.  He struggles to his feet, a little woozy from the fall, but Gwen comes to his rescue, defending the man she loves with powerful thrusts and slashes that leave several Marauders dead or wounded.  With his equilibrium still slightly jarred Magnus spots a familiar figure amongst the Marauder ranks.  As the effects of the fall begin to fade the armor of a Templar becomes clear and Magnus realizes who it is, a panicked look crossing his face.
MAGNUS
Dronjak!  What are you doing?  Get out of there, they'll kill you!
He begins to run towards Lord Dronjak, but slows and eventually stops as horrible realization dawns on him.  Dronjak isn't fighting against the Marauders.  He's marching with them.  His mentor, one of the greatest heroes Metallicus and the Realm has ever seen, is fighting alongside the Marauders.

END OF FLASHBACK SEQUENCE

CUT TO:
EXt. FOREST, CLEARING - morning
Magnus awakens with a gasp, breathing quickly and sweating.  He wipes away some sweat from his brow as he looks around, slowly realizing the dream is over.  Or more appropriately, a memory that was like a nightmare.  The elder Templar of the group takes a few moments to regain his composure before gently nudging the others with his foot.
MAGNUS
Wake up, we're heading out.
Joacim yawns as he slowly climbs to his feet, his animal skins seeming to do little for the cold.
OSKAR
Wake up?  I just went to sleep.
MAGNUS
No, we've been sleeping for a few hours.  Don't start complaining, I don't want to hear it, so just get moving. But take a few minutes to warm up your legs a little first, don't want you three to take the risk of getting frostbite.
CUT TO:
int. iron keep, PALACE, princess rosen's room - noon
RAvenlord
You want to do what?  You can't be serious.
The camera pans across the room to show that Ravenlord is in fact not talking to himself but the Princess, her servant Eppu appearing to be cleaning one of the corners of the room.  
ROSEN
I want to visit my parents' grave.  So does Anders.
RAVENLORD
I don't care what you or your brother want, the royal cemetery is too public a place.
EPPU
I thought you wanted the citizens to know she's alive and healthy so you could better keep them in line?  
The Ravenlord lets out an frustrated sigh.
RAVENLORD
I'm not in the mood for your talk, Eppu.
In the corner of the room Eppu smiles.
EPPU
No, you never were.
The sorcerer frowns even more, but turns his attention back to Rosen and smiles.  She lowers her head with a disheartened look on her face.
ROSEN
(meek)
As you wish.
The Princess' manner seems much more reserved and docile than the more audacious attitude she displayed earlier.  Ravenlord gently cups her chin and raises her head, looking deep into her beautiful eyes.
RAVENLORD
(suggestively)
 I don't believe in charity, so perhaps if you do a... favor... for me, I'll do a favor for you, Princess? 
ROSEN
I'll keep it in mind.
RAVENLORD
Good.  I have to speak with Dronjak, so we shall have to continue this conversation at another time, Rosen.
ROSEN
Of course, milord.
Ravenlord smiles again as he releases his hold on her chin, striding out of the room.  As soon as he is gone Rosen's façade  of weakness is gone, melted away by the anger burning within her.
ROSEN
That disgusting pig!  Who does he think he is, making advances one me like that?
Eppu stops cleaning and leaves the corner of the room.
EPPU
I suggest you do your best to not be alone with him.  
ROSEN
I know.  He's been coming on stronger the last few weeks.  I may have to drop this frail little girl act and hit him in the jaw.
Eppu smiles.
EPPU
Just make sure I'm there for it.
Rosen laughs and pats Eppu on the shoulder affectionately.
ROSEN
Wouldn't have it any other way.
The Princess heads for the wall and begins searching for the brick that will slide open the door to the secret passageway.  Eppu politely coughs, the old man's head facing exactly where the Princess is despite his handicap.
Eppu
And where do you think you're going?
ROSEN
To spy on them, of course.  He did say that he needed to speak with Dronjak, and we know how well those two get along. So if he's actually talking to him sooner than that report of his than it has to be something important.
Eppu grins like a proud father.
EPPU
You may be brash, but you're not stupid.
ROSEN
Thanks... I think.
The Princess smiles mischievously as she pushes in the correct brick and part of the wall slides open.  
ROSEN
I'll try not to get into too much trouble.
EPPU
No you won't.
Rosen's laughter is cut off as the secret door slides shut behind her.  

BEGINNING OF FLASHBACK SEQUENCE
CUT TO:
ext. iRON KEEP, COURTYARD - afternoon
cut to:
lord dronjak's pov:
Magnus' yelling catches Lord Dronjak's attention and he focuses in on the source of the familiar voice.  He smiles when he spots Magnus and begins to draw closer to him with a steady stride.  Battling Marauders look at him with recognition and get out of his path, and the Templars look at him with recognition and ask questions as they got out of his way.  But he continues, silently walking and the fighting resuming in his wake.  He stops several feet short of a confused looking Magnus and smiles.
lorD DRONJAK
Welcome back, Magnus.  
MAGNUS
(uneasy)
What are you doing, Dronjak?
LORD DRONJAK
Joining the battle, of course.
MAGNUS
(dumbfounded)
What are you doing out of bed?  When we left you were so sick you could hardly move... and now you're with the Marauders against us?  It doesn't make any sense!
Magnus' mentor draws a sword full of nicks and scratches that pales considerably in quality when compared to the blade held by Magnus, and the scabbard he drew it from appears to be in an even worse condition.
LORD DRONJAK
I realized something while you were away, Magnus.  All this time, all these years, I've been fighting on the wrong side.
MAGNUS
What are you talking about?  And where did you get that sword?
LORD DRONJAK
It took me a while to accept it, but the King, the Queen, and even the Templars, they're all corrupt, Magnus.  Even you, and that whore from Oster you're with.  Did I ever mention how much I despised her?
MAGNUS
Many times, only not in such harsh words...
Magnus is still having a hard time accepting this, waiting for Dronjak to make the first move.  
LORD DRONJAK
I told you to stay away from that trash, Magnus.  But you wouldn't listen.  You never listen, you know that?  No matter what I do, you can't simply follow my instructions.
mAGNUS
(dazed)
You're insane... you're under a spell, something.  You don't know what you're saying.
LORD DRONJAK
Actually, I feel as if a fog has been lifted from my mind, I can finally see you and that damn order for what it really is.  A tool for corruption, traveling the Realm ostensibly "freeing" kingdoms while the Templars implant puppets of the King to rule.  
Dronjak spreads his arms far apart, inviting Magnus to use his sword.
Lord dRONJAK (cont'd)
Since you're my apprentice, Magnus, I offer you the first strike.  
magnus
I'm not going to fight you or kill you, Dronjak.  Just hand me the sword, you're still under the influence of the sickness, no one will think any less of you.
Dronjak brings his sword into a defensive position.
LORD DRONJAK
(disgusted)
As usual, you never do as I tell you.  I don't know why I e-- oof!
Dronjak is interrupted as a Marauder is knocked into him from behind by a Templar, Magnus' mentor being pushed forward, his blade stabbing into Magnus' abdomen.  Dronjak pulls the sword out of Magnus who lets out a grunt of pain before falling to his knees and collapsing on his back, no longer moving.  Despite his earlier remarks he looks horrified at what has happened and tears begin to form in his eyes.  He kneels down next to Magnus and takes one of his hands.
LORD DRonjak
(distraught)
What have I done... ?  Magnus, wake up.  Wake up damn it!  See, you never listen.  Never do what I tell you.  Oh, what in the name of the Metal God have I done?  I killed him, and he was the closest thing to a son I'll ever know...
He gets a manic look in his eyes.
LORD DRONJAK (cont'd)
No... I didn't kill Magnus.  No, it wasn't me...
He stands and faces the Marauder that bumped into him and points at him with his sword.
LORD DRONJAK (cONT'D)
It was you!  You killed Magnus!
The Marauder senses something bad is about to happen and tries to make a run for it, but as soon as he turns his back a sword is plunged into his spine.  Dronjak lets out a scream of rage and despair as he moves onto the Templar who knocked the Marauder into him. The Templar is too stunned and Dronjak's blade cleaves into the Templar. Despite its poor looking condition, the sword seems to easily cut through the armor of the Templar. Dronjak begins to attack Marauder and Templar alike, whoever comes close to him. 
 While Dronjak is in his rampage the camera focuses on armed citizens who join the battle on the side of the Templars and Gunter calls for a full retreat.  Gwen screams that they have to help Magnus but Gunter forces her to come with him.  Moments later a few Templars find Magnus is still breathing in the middle of the retreat and take him with them, unbeknownst to Gwen, Gunter, and Dronjak, who has not tired with his slaughter, now focusing on the citizens he once protected with his own life.

END OF FLASHBACK SEQUENCE
cUT to:
INT. IRON KEEP, PALACE, THRONE ROOM - NOON
Lord Dronjak wakes up with a start and is mumbling something about Magnus, but aside from his apprentice's name nothing is really coherent.  He looks around the throne room, soon realizing it didn't just happen, it was a memory.  Dronjak rubs a hand over his bald head, damp from a light sweat.  He takes deep breaths and touches the same scabbard from the flashback, which is resting on his lap.  He strokes it as if it were a pet and he begins to calm down.  With a loud creak the only door in the room is swung open, the Ravenlord entering and waving his bodyguards away.  While Dronjak had been starting to calm down he seems to become more agitated thanks to the sorcerer's presence.
LORD DRONJAK
(irritated)
What now?  Did one of the Marauders get a cat stuck in a tree and now you need to consult me?
RAVENLORD
(feigned hurt)
Oh, milord, your insult tears me asunder.
The Ravenlord frowns, to Dronjak's dismay.
RAVENLROD (CONT'D)
No, Dronjak, I have much more valuable and grave news.  It concerns a former... friend... of yours.  What, you don't want to guess?      
The sorcerer has caught his fellow tyrant's attention and Dronjak impatiently waits for Ravenlord to get to the reason he's here.
lorD DRONJAK
I have no interest in games, just get on with what you came here to tell me.
RAVENlOrD
Not tell you, Dronjak. Show you.  
Dronjak countenance displays perplexity as the Ravenlord approaches him.  The magus weaves his hands through the air in an intricate pattern and begins muttering some incantation.  Dark smoke begins to appear in the room from some magical source and accumulates between the Ravenlord's palms.  The sorcerer spreads his hands and the dark cloud widens until its center begins to form into something resembling translucent water.  It briefly shimmers before something is shown on it.  Something high in the air looks down at a courtyard as four figures rush out into it, the only other person in the courtyard being an immobile body. Whatever is looking down at the scene is circling through the air above the figures.  The circling stops and becomes centered from atop a building and from this vantage point whatever is looking at the figures focuses on them.  One of the figures turns and is staring straight ahead, looking as if he is staring at Lord Dronjak.  It is Magnus.  
LORD DRONJAK
(shocked)
It can't be...
The four Templars finish standing around and head into an alleyway, minutes later a Marauder force arriving in the courtyard.  
The Ravenlord drops his arms to his side, the smoke and translucent vision disappearing into thin air instantly.
RAVENLORD
That was courtesy of little my spies in Marysdorf.  Perhaps you know one of those four men?
LORD DRONJAK
Don't be stupid, of course I do!  Only... Magnus died.  I ki-- he died ten years ago.  
RAVENLORD
He looks very much alive to me, Dronjak, and it looked like he had some new friends neither of us have seen before.  No official word will reach us for a day or so, but thanks to my spies that's not important, I already know.  Magnus and a few other Templars were involved in a fight in a tavern in Marysdorf.  They killed a dozen Marauders and managed to escape.  
Dronjak is deep in thought, hardly paying attention to the sorcerer.
LORD DRONJAK
You're sure that what your spies have provided us with can be trusted?
RAVENLORD
(frustrated)
Of course!  They've never failed us before, have they?
LORD DRONJAK
No, they have not.  It seems I have underestimated my apprentice.  The question is whether this is a threat or not.
The Ravenlord rubs the temple of his skull in frustration.
RAVENLORD
You have to think about whether it's a threat or not?
loRD DRONJAK
He hasn't caused any trouble for us in the last decade.
RAVENLORD
That's exactly why you should be alarmed!  There has been no sign of him in the last ten years, and now he's suddenly a day or two away from the capital?  Perhaps his living was not as much of a surprise to you as you acted.
LORD DRONJAK
What, are you insinuating I let him live on purpose?
The magus curtly nods.
RAVENLORD
It would explain why he lived and seems to have not suffered any long-term injuries from this stab you claim he received.
The color of Dronjak's face begins to redden in anger and balls his fist around the hilt of the sword inside the scabbard that rests on his lap, as if contemplating drawing it.
LORD DRONJAK
(bellowing)
How dare make such an accusation!  If I can watch my former King and Queen be executed, I can kill Magnus without any hesitation!
The volume and intensity of Dronjak's outburst surprises the Ravenlord and he takes a step backwards, as if frightened by his fellow tyrant.  
RAVENLORD
Very well, then you didn't let him live on purpose.  The important question at hand is what do we do?  Why is he showing his face in Metallicus after all this time?
The former Templar rubs his chin in thought.
LORD DRONJAK
The only thing of importance near Marysdorf is this very capital we are in.  Me, of course, that's it.  He's returned to finally face me for what he sees as my betrayal.  
RAVENLORD
If it was just revenge than why not any other time in the last several years?  No, there has to be more to it.
LORD DRONJAK
He could've just been building up his courage.  After all, I gave him the chance for a first strike ten years ago and he refused it.
RAVENLORD
Maybe, but I doubt it.  It's so obvious, the Princess and Prince!  He along with his new comrades must be planning to sneak into this palace and kill the both of us, free the royals, and try to start up a revolution of some sorts.  We should increase the number of guards immediately and put more Marauders on the streets and have them on the look out for Magnus.
Dronjak shakes his head and dismisses the idea with a casual wave of his hand.
lord dronjak
Why bother?  He will come to me, and then I will deal with him and this time make sure he is dead.  
RAVENLORD
But what of his other plans?  That may take care of Magnus, but there are still his friends.
LORD DRONJAK
They're of little importance, Magnus is the greatest danger to us.  With him dead any following he's constructed over the years will decay along with his corpse.  However, increase the number of Marauders that guard the Princes and Prince's rooms, we can't afford to risk them being freed.
The Ravenlord sighs and gives a mocking bow.
RAVENLORD
(sarcastic)
As you command, milord.
LORD DRONJAK
Just do it.
The Ravenlord stands tall and is quick to leave the dark room.  By the time the door creaks shut the de facto ruler of Metallicus is already in deep thought about what is to come.
loRD DRONJAK
Magnus... fate let you survive just so could your life away?  
Dronjak becomes out of focus as the camera zooms in on the painting of the former Templar that is above his throne.  
Cut To:
int. iron keep, PALACE, SECRET PASSAGE 
On the other side of the wall Princess Rosen Elmgren is once again spying on the tyrants through the peep holes in the painting and wall.  She slides the panel shut, cutting off the view into the throne room and the light that comes from it.  The Princess jumps down from the block of wood she was standing on and collects her candle, heading down the passageway as she mulls over what she's overheard.
cut to:
int. iron keep, PALACE, hallway - noon
The Ravenlord walks through one of the palace's many hallways. A man in spiked armor (Hugo Weaving) approaches him and they are both flanked by a pair of Marauders.
The sorcerer shakes his head indignantly.  
RAVENLORD
That old fool.  That old incompetent fool.  You overheard the discussion?
man in spiked armor
Every word of it.
RAVENLORD
Good.  Dronjak just wants to wait for Magnus and his comrades to come to us.  If it were just Magnus than I might agree, but there were others with him.  So we shall have to make arrangements to deal with them before they make it to the palace.    
MAN IN SPIKED ARMOR
Are you sure it's wise to disobey Dronjak?
The Ravenlord glares at the man across from him.
RAVENLORD
If you have a problem with it, Johansson, then I will find someone else. 
JOHANSSON
I have served you for fifteen years, Ravenlord.  I would think after all that time you would have a little more faith in me.  I'm merely concerned that if Dronjak finds out you're going against his wishes--
RAVENLORD
(interrupting)
As I said, Dronjak is an old incompetent fool.  He sits on his throne locked away in darkness without any real idea what is going on in the outside world.  Sometimes I wonder why I don't just kill him.  But then again as long as I visit him every week with news he'll remain quiet in his throne room, and he is an excellent figurehead for his kingdom.    
JOhANSSON
What did you have in mind?
RAVENLORD
Increase the number of guards in the palace, specifically the quarters of the Princess and her brother.  Tell your forces outside of the palace to be on the look out for anything suspicious and give them a description of Magnus.
JOHANSSON
It could take some time for my description to reach every Marauder, assuming half of them don't forget it after a day.
RAVENLORD
Then find artists to draw Magnus based on your descriptions and pass them around, or something.  I would prefer to capture Magnus in the city instead of Dronjak's brilliant plan of letting them walk on into the palace.
JOHANSSON
I wouldn't mind being the person that kills Magnus instead of Dronjak.
RAVENLORD
Ah, yes, you two had something of a rivalry, didn't you?
Johansson
(curt)
Something like that.
RAVENLORD
Good, then that's more incentive for you not to fail.
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exT. iron KEEP, city gates - afternoon
The capital of Metallicus is a huge city, stretching on for quite a distance and is a complete opposite of Kleinsburg.  Unlike that village and Marysdorf there is an actual wall around Iron Keep.  While not as majestic as they were ten years ago the city the walls and gate of Iron Keep are impressive nonetheless.  The massive walls stretch a hundred feet into the air with Marauders along the catwalks.  And scattered every few hundred feet along the walls are small towers occupied by Marauders.  
The thick wooden doors of the city gate are open and its mighty steel portcullis raised.  Several roads lead into the city and each is flooded with people either entering or leaving the kingdom's capital.    And mixed in with the citizens going to and fro are Marauders, more of whom also stand guard at the gates.  For many this is the tenth year they have done this routine and it has gotten to be quite repetitive and many who should be searching the citizens do not even bother, eagerly anticipating the time when their shifts will be over and they can go get drunk.  
The winding roads were once well-crafted paths of stone but over the last ten years have fallen into a state of disrepair and a number of stone bricks have been unearthed for some other use by Marauders and desperate citizens of the capital, though its hard to tell with the layer of snow covering the ground.  Amongst a large crowd on one of the somewhat broken down roads are the four Templars of Steel Magnus, Joacim, Oskar, and Stefan.  Their weapons hidden by the animal skins they wear around their bodies, the Templars draw closer to the city gates along with the crowd, moving at a steady pace as the Marauders are more interested in herding people along instead of searching them.
mAGNUS
(to Joacim and Stefan)
Try not to cause problems you two.
JoACIM
What?  When have I ever caused problems?
OSKAR
(whispering to Joacim)
Now's probably not the time for sarcasm.
Magnus ignores Joacim and continues walking, the others following.
JOACIM
(whispering to Oskar)
Well, I shouldn't be treated like some kind of unreliable whelp.
OSKAR
(whispering to Joacim)
You did cause that ruckus back in Marysdorf.  And I know you're going to say the Marauders coming after Stefan would've caused the same kind of problem, but that doesn't nullify what you did.  Disagree as much as you want, but as far as I'm concerned we finished arguing about the matter last night.  
Joacim sighs indignantly and drops the subject as the four Templars become part of the crowd that is passing through the gateway into the capital itself.
MAGNUS
(whispering)
Don't draw attention to yourselves, and remember - no names.
The younger Templars nod and Joacim does his best to not look angry, all of them resisting the urge to strike out at the Marauders.  Like cattle the citizens and the Templars, are herded through the large city gates, Marauders glaring at the random citizens and some of the bored brigands harassing random people.  A man in front of Joacim is grabbed by a pair of Marauders and beaten and his money stolen.  Magnus looks to Joacim and shakes his head.  Joacim sighs and curtly nods in acquiescence, walking past the poor helpless man.
CUT TO:
ext. iron keep - afternoon
Finally the Templars have arrived in the capital of the kingdom.  Magnus halts, the other Templars stopping as well, but the swarm of people do not as they merely go around the Templars and continue on their way.
OSKAR
What's wrong?
STEFAN
(muttering)
The Marauders, for one.
OSKAR
Besides that.
MAGNUS
This road...
Magnus stares down at the road he and the others are standing on, memories flooding to the forefront his mind as he looks at the road that the returning Templars took ten years ago and that so many of them were slaughtered upon.  
JOACIM
You alright?
The elder Templar disposes of the thoughts with a shake of his head and he offers a weak smile.
MAGNUS
It's just been so long since I've been here, the place where I was raised and lived for most of my life.  It's bringing up so many memories, some good, others bad.  Heh, I remember over in that alleyway when I was a child my friends and I would play with our little wooden swords and shields, pretending to be Templars...
Magnus coughs, as if dismissing that line of thinking and he puts on his best stern face.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
But I can reminisce later.  We need to find to get to somewhere a little more private and give some thought to what we're going to do next.
Oskar points a thumb over his shoulder.
OSKAR
There's always an inn or something.
Joacim groans.
JOACIM
If that's some kind of joke, it's not funny Oskar.
oskar
I was serious.
MAGNUS
No, Oskar's right.  It's a good place for a number of people to go and not come out of for a while without being conspicuous.  That is, as long as certain people don't arouse suspicion inside the inn...  
JOACIM
(mumbling)
I got it the first time.
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int. iron keep, PALACE, pRINCESS ROSEN'S ROOM - night
The Princess is hurriedly sifting through an open drawer of a cabinet, collecting mostly clothes.  She hurries over to a sack on her bed and stuffs the clothing inside.  Rosen frowns at the young man in his late teens that sits on her bed, her brother PRINCE ANDERS ELMGREN (Jesse Metcalfe)  He notices the look.
Anders
What, why are you looking at me like that?  I'm not doing anything.
rosen
Exactly!  You're not doing a single thing!
The Prince lightly pulls at the shirt he wears.
ANDERS
I've got everything I need.
Rosen is about to scorn him further, but the there is a knock at the door and it swings open only a second later.  The remnants of the royal family are relieved to see that it is only Eppu.  Their servant shuts the door behind him and nods, slowly making his way to the bed.
EPPU
You called, Princess?  Though I'm guessing you don't really need me to clean up your room. Nor do you, Prince.
ANDERS
How'd you know I was here?
Eppu smiles.
EPPU
I may not be able to see, but I can hear just fine.
RoSEN
Eppu, do you remember the way through the secret passageways that leads to outside of the palace?
EPPU
(cautiously)
Yes... but why would you want to know that?
ROSEN
We need to get out of the palace after nightfall.
EPPU
What in the world brought this up?  
rosen
It's important that we leave tonight.
The old man shakes his head.
EPPU
Leaving isn't something to be taken lightly.
ANDERS
Why?  What's the big deal?  We should've left years ago.
Their elderly 'servant' takes a seat on the Princess' bed, his hand rest on the sack she was packing.  He sighs. 
EPPU
So, did you plan on at least consulting me beforehand?
ROSEN
Of course!  We just had to get ready so we could leave as soon as possible.
EPPU
Well, then the sooner you tell me, the sooner you might get to leave.
Rosen does exactly that, explaining the contents of the conversation between Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord she had listened in on, repeating a few parts at Eppu's request not because he's hard of hearing but because he wants to cement the facts into his mind for consideration.
EPPU
Hmmm, I remember Magnus, he had a pretty good head on his shoulders.  Whatever he's planning, I think it will be easier for him to do if you two aren't prisoners of Dronjak and the Ravenlord.  So get your things, and I'll show you the way out.
ANDERS
You make it sound like you're not coming.
EPPU
Of course I'm not going with you.
ROSEN
(surprised)
What?
Eppu offers a warm, comforting smile.
EPPU
I'm old, I'm tired, and I'm blind.  I will only slow you down.  And I don't care how much you beg and whine, I'm not going.  It's even less safe outside the palace than it is inside, that's why I never showed you the way, and if you're taking the chance now it won't be with me.  Besides, while you're gone I might be able to keep the tyrants from finding out for a few extra hours.  
The Princess and Prince sigh, but agree to Eppu's terms.
EPPU
Then if there's no further delays, let's get you two out of here.
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int. iron keep, PALACE, SECRET PASSAGE - night
Eppu, Rosen, and Anders move through one of the secret passageways, Eppu holding the only source of light; a lone candle.  Since he is blind it is more for his charges' convenience than his own.  With Eppu in the lead they come to a halt.  
ANDERS
Great, a dead end. 
EPPU
Have a little faith in me, Prince Anders.
He hands the candle off to Rosen and begins searching the wall in front of them, pushing in a brick.  With a soft groan a portion of the wall slides open, a small bit of moonlight illuminating some of the passageway.      
EPPU 
Well, there you are young ones.  Be safe and remember what I've taught you.
A teary eyed Rosen embraces Eppu, and while Anders does his best not to look like he's crying he hugs Eppu as well.  The old man waits a few moments before pressing the same brick once again, the wall sliding back into place as if it had never moved.
EPPU
Good luck.
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EXT. iron keep,  outside of secret entrance - night
The remnants of Metallicus' royal family look at the wall they had just come out of for a few seconds, silently praying to the Metal God to watch over the man who had acted like their father.  When they're done, they slip through the night away from the palace, the first time they've been outside of it in a decade.  And on an old oak tree near the wall they had come off of is a raven, nearly hidden in the night, and it has watched the whole thing with an unnatural curiosity.
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INT. iron keep, the winter fortress - day
Inside the inn/tavern known as "the Winter Fortress" the three younger Templars sit around a table, each of them eating a small meal.  As the camera pans the room a view is provided of what Otto would probably like to turn "the Inn" into, a respectable place for drink and lodgings that doesn't have a single Marauder in it.  Magnus returns to the table, sitting amongst the other Templars to finish off his meal, which is the smallest of them all.  
JOACIM
(quietly)
Well?
MAGNUS
(quietly)
I inquired about Wolfgang.  They claimed to have never heard of him, but my asking about him didn't seem to make them too happy.
OSKAR
(quietly)
Yeah, I can see a couple people watching us closely.
STEFAN
(quietly)
Us whispering like this isn't going to help.
MAGNUS
(quietly)
Good, we need to meet Wolfgang as soon as possible, and if acting suspicious gets that done than so be it.  Be on your guard and stay together.  If Skipp was right they'll try to jump us, and we should be ready, but keep in mind these people are on our side, they just don't know it yet. So try to hurt them as little as possible
JOACIM
(quietly)
And what do we do until then?
Magnus shrugs as he finishes a glass of milk.
MAGNUS
(quietly)
Wait.
JOACIM
(quietly)
Sounds like it'll be fun.
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INT. iron keep, royal castle, throne room - dawn
The usual eerie silence of the hijacked throne room is shattered with a violent yell.  The usually tired and drained Lord Dronjak is now standing on his feet, albeit somewhat unsteady after a long time of mostly just sitting on his throne.  His face is red with rage and he holds the sword aloft, although it's still in its battered scabbard.  Fear is the major emotion on the Ravenlord's face as the dark clouds and translucent water-like substance dissipates.  It can just barely made out that it showed the Princess and Prince leaving the palace through the secret entrance before it is completely gone.
LORD DRONJAK
(livid)
They escaped?  Those little brats just walked on out of the damn palace?  They were one of the few reasons those fools outside of this palace didn't rise up and revolt! 
RAVENLORD
I didn't know about that secret entrance!    
LORD DRONJAK
Worthless excuse.  I have been idle in this room for far too long while your incompetence ran unchecked throughout the kingdom.  I shudder to think what the Badlands are like.  
The Ravenlord begins to take steps backwards to put distance between him and the former Templar, but with each step backwards Dronjak takes one forward.
RAVENLORD
I didn't know about the secret entrance, you didn't know about the secret entrance either!  How can you -- Eppu!
LORD DRONJAK
Eppu?
RAVENLORD
Of course!  That old man knows more secrets about this palace than anyone alive!  How else could they have learned about it when we didn't?  
Dronjak muses this over in his mind for a moment.  He unsheathes his sword halfway, exposing its blemished blade.  Ravenlord's eyes go slightly wider, but he sighs in relief when Dronjak walks away from him with unsteady steps. But he seems to be walking easier, his anger like a fuel for his aging body.
LORD DRONJAK
I should've killed my old teacher, instead of just blinding him.  If he is indeed responsible for this, I may rectify that mistake tonight.  
Magnus' mentor leaves the throne room through the only door.  Ravenlord lets it shut with a mighty creak before standing up, no longer scared and instead infuriated.  He storms to the door, trying to violently swing it open but it is so heavy it moves fairly slow.  The sorcerer sighs in frustration and violently kicks the door, leaving the throne room --
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int. iron keep, palace, hALLWAY - dawn
-- and coming into the hallway.  The magus looks about for a moment, Johansson coming around a corner.  He notices the Ravenlord seems somewhat flushed and he raises an inquisitive eyebrow.
JOHANSSON
I overheard what happened.  Letting it get to you?
RAVENLORD
Shut up!  Damn that Dronjak, and damn Magnus!  Dronjak was content to sit in a daze in his throne while I ran things.  Now Magnus coming back has stirred him. 
He pounds his fist against one of the brick walls, ignoring the pain.
RAVENLORD (CONT'D)
And with the Princess and Prince on the loose, his reasserting authority can only complicate matters.  
JOHANSSON
I have had all the ways in and out of the city sealed off.  If you want me to find the Princess and Prince soon I will need more Marauders to aid in the search and to make searches all over the capital.  Though I should warn you, an increase in activity will attract the attention of the citizens or the capital.
RAVENLORD
I don't care what those citizens think and I don't care what you have to do to find the Princess and Prince, don't do it.  Or, if you can't capture them, kill them.  Just do whatever it takes to end this before it becomes too big of a fiasco.
The former Templar in spiked armor nods.
JOHANSSON
I shall begin immediately.
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int. iron keep, the winter fortress - noon
A few hours have passed and the Templars are still at their table.
MAGNUS
(whispering)
Alright, I think it's time for all of us to head to our room.
JOACIM
(whispering)
Quite a few of new people have come here since you mentioned Wolfgang, I can see weapons under some of their clothes.
OSKAR
(whispering)
You're sure letting ourselves get cornered is the best way to go about this?
Magnus finishes another of glass of water and pushes his seat away from the table.
MAGNUS
(whispering)
It's definitely not the best way to go about it, but it is the fastest and that's what counts right now.
Magnus stands and heads for a flight of stairs leading up to the inn section of the Winter Fortress, the other Templars quickly joining him.  When all four have disappeared as they go to the next floor a dozen citizens rapidly head up the stairs as well, the camera following them -- 

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INT. IRON KEEP, WINTER FORTRESS, SECOND FLOOR, HALLWAY
-- to the second floor, where the four Templars are waiting for them.  The citizens cautiously advance on the Templars, a few of the citizens looking anxious.
MAGNUS
Hello, we are looking for Wolfgang, perhaps you can take us to him?
The twelve or so citizens begin to circle the Templars.
LEAD CITIZEN
Is that so?  Why would you be looking for this Wolfgang fellow you mentioned?
MAGNUS
Are you sure you want me to say it in this hallway?  May not be the best place.
The lead citizen shrugs.
LEAD CITIZEN
Be my guest.  
MAGNUS
It doesn't seem like the most secure place, but very well.  We are looking for Wolfgang so that we may assist him.
The citizen smiles.
LEAD CITIZEN
So you and your friends, people none of the citizens in this bar recognize, want to help this Wolfgang fellow?  Well, isn't that nice of you.
Magnus sighs, realizing that they don't believe him.  He reaches under his cloak, drawing his sword.  All of the citizens draw a weapon, mostly daggers and other easily concealed weapons.  Magnus approaches the lead citizen, who tenses up, but the elder Templar holds his sword out to the lead citizen who cautiously accepts it, looking it over.  His eyes go wide.
LEAD CITIZEN
This... sword.  It's a sword of a Templar... where did you get this?
MAGNUS
It has been mine for more than fifteen years, when I first made it in the forges within the palace.
LEAD CITIZEN
(cautiously)
How do you know the name Wolfgang?
MAGNUS
It was told to me in Marysdorf by someone that was in the city to meet me, Skipp.  My name is Magnus.
While the citizen recognizes the name of Skipp, he hides it.  But when Magnus tells him who he is, his eyebrows raise in surprise.
LEAD CITIZEN
You're Magnus... the Magnus?
He nods.
MAGNUS
And my three companions are also Templars.  We were sent to Iron Keep to help with the Revolution.  And since we only have less than two weeks before it starts, we would like to meet with him immediately.
Still with a look of stunned belief at being in the presence of such a famous Templar of Steel, he hands the sword back to its owner.
LEAD CITIZEN
Well, you've been talking with Wolfgang for the past few moments.  It's an honor to meet you Magnus, your comrades too.
MAGNUS
It's honor to meet you and your men as well.
After Wolfgang and Magnus have had time to introduce their respective comrades and shake hands, Wolfgang leads them to a door that leads down --
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int. iron keep, the winter fortress, cellar - noon
-- to a cellar, a more secure place for them to speak.  Magnus describes Skipp in detail, to put the rest of Wolfgang's doubts at ease.  Finally a hundred percent convinced, Wolfgang begins telling Magnus what Skipp didn't, that is, a very detailed and lengthy description of the situation in Iron Keep.  The Marauders have taken much of what is valuable and now many of them are massed on the northern border with the fragile kingdom of Tiranus, and a great deal of food grown by the citizens of Metallicus is being stolen to help feed that army of Marauders.  Wolfgang tells the Templars a great deal more of information, ranging from surveillance done on the Marauders to what the citizens know about Princess Rosen and Prince Anders still being held inside the palace to rumors about Lord Dronjak and the Ravenlord before coming to the subject of the number of Marauders and number of citizens inside the capital.  
WOLFGANG
Like I have said earlier, the number of Marauders have dwindled with the continued subjugation of the Badlands and the build up of forces on the border with Tiranus, but there are still several thousand Marauders scattered throughout the city.
JOACIM
There are tens of thousands of citizens though, it shouldn't be too hard to overthrow the tyrants.
Wolfgang shakes his head.
WOLFGANG
The Marauders at least have some experience at fighting, most of us do not.  And these aren't the Marauders you're probably used to dealing with.  The former Templar Johansson, one of the traitors ten years ago, has spent his time training most of the Marauders, at least most of those that have spent at least a few years here in the capital.  We think there are a thousand or so Marauders that have only come here recently and weren't trained by him.
Magnus clenches a fist in anger.
MAGNUS
I remember Johansson, he was a jealous and untrustworthy person, he was assigned as the Ravenlord's assistant for a few years before the Council of Steel evicted him from our ranks when it was found out he was stealing items from the royal treasury.  Still, it's hard to believe he would train those despicable Marauders.
STEFAN
He'll get his comeuppance, especially if he has helped the Marauders.
WOLFGANG
Yes, he will.  He has been a brutal lieutenant of the tyrants.  
His train of thought alters.  He walks over to a cabinet and retrieves a large map, spreading it over a table for all to see.  There are numerous red arrows that lead to red circles which have writing by them.
WOLFGANG (CONT'D)
This may be of interest to you.  We have been watching the Marauders for a long time and have managed to chart their patrol routes.  The red arrows are the paths the Marauders take and the red circles are where they stop, we've got estimates of how long they stay there written next to the circles.  We update it if we find a change. Sometimes the Marauders go on random patrols.
Magnus nods, sitting at the table so he can better examine the map.
MAGNUS
Still, this will prove invaluable.  We'll need to plan a meeting spot to mass on the day of the Revolution and devise paths to key areas that will encounter the least amount of Marauders.
JOACIM
Why avoid them?  We should wipe them all out.
MAGNUS
Because we want to win with as few citizens of Metallicus dead as possible.  By focusing on key areas we can cut the head of the snake off.
JOACIM
Oh, makes sense.  But what about the palace?  It's the most important place on this map, but it's a giant fortress, I don't see us taking it no matter how many citizens rise up.
Wolfgang sighs, obviously a subject that's been weighing in his mind for quite some time.
WOLFGANG
We'd need an army of experienced veterans.
MAGNUS
And siege weapons, both of which we don't have.  The only way I can think of penetrating it is digging tunnels, but they'd know what we were doing and we'd be vulnerable arrows.  Not to mention the time it would take to do all that tunneling...
WOLFGANG
We might just have to do it, though I'd be happy to hear another way.  But before we can do that we have to worry about our army.
MAGNUS
What have you taught them so far?
The former Templars trainee shrugs.
WOLFGANG
Some basics, how to hold a sword, things like that.  My problem was I couldn't train citizens fast enough, though with four more people helping we should make great progress.
MAGNUS
We'll need space to train many of the citizens.
Wolfgang shakes his head.
WOLFGANG
That's not something we have very much of.  Taverns and homes.  That's about it.
JOACIM
Why don't we train people, then have them go off and train a group of people while we train others, and so on?
WOLFGANG
Hey, that's not a bad idea.
Magnus nods approvingly.
Magnus
The citizens won't be trained as well by someone that isn't one of us, but it's the only way to train the numbers we need in the time we have.  My only reservation is moving large amounts of people.  Since we don't have the space to train them how to move in huge numbers, when they need to move on the day of the Revolution they're bound to be sloppy.  
WOLFGANG
Yes, but we can't really help that.
osKAR
How about weapons?
WOLFGANG
We'll be able to procure and forge some swords, but the majority of those that join in on the Revolution will not have them.
JOACIM
Fantastic.  The Marauders will be better trained and well-armed compared to us.
OSKAR
(teasing)
And you wanted to attack them head on.
Magnus' apprentice shrugs.
JOACIM
Yeah, well.
MAGNUS
Joacim, do you remember much of the city?
JOACIM
I was still young when my family left Iron Keep, so I only remember bits and pieces.
MAGNUS
Alright, over the next week I want you, Oskar, and Stefan to have every nook and cranny of the capital memorized, along with everything on this map that has to do with Marauder patrols and positions.
Magnus stops looking at the map, satisfied he's got all the information down, and looks to Wolfgang.
MAGNUS
What's the situation with the training, currently?  Is any going on... anything like that.
WOLFGANG
Well, I was in a session when I got word someone was asking about me.  So I left and came here, and the rest you know.
MAGNUS
Ah.  Well, there's no time to waste so go ahead and use Oskar, Joacim, and Stefan as you see fit for the training effort.  I'll join in soon enough, but there's still some matters I need to discuss with you.  
WOLFGANG
Great to hear, we have many people eagerly waiting some kind of training.
Wolfgang points to one of the citizens standing by his side and looks to the three young Templars.
WOLFGANG (CONT'D)
Go with him.  He'll take you to the session I was working with.  After that we'll send word to more people and have them meet with you.  
The three Templars follow the man Wolfgang pointed to, several citizens following them as they leave.
MAGNUS
About us being here, do you plan on spreading the word of the resurgence of the Templars and the coming Revolution?
WOLFGANG
Of course.  But slowly at first.  I mean, everyone trained by you four will have no doubts about you being Templars, but I think if we told the entire capital too soon that the word would reach the Marauders.
Magnus nods.
MAGNUS
I agree completely.  This Revolution has already been jeopardized enough as it is.
He notices Wolfgang's quizzical expression and begins to tell him everything that happened on the journey.
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EXT. IRON KEEP, moldy crow inn - noon
Somewhere in the city of Iron Keep, a great distance away from the Winter Fortress a somewhat run down inn stands, yet  it is still better looking than Otto's place. It is the Moldy Crow.  In addition to its windows being blocked with heavy drapes a sign is nailed into the main door reading "Closed - Remodeling."  Like a ghost the camera goes through the door --
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INt. IRON KEEP, the moldy crow inn
-- and enters the Inn to find many tables and chairs have been pushed off to one side of the room to provide a wide open space where over a dozen citizens, both male and female, young and old, practice moves taught by Joacim who is in front of the group.  While he once again shows a move with his steel blade, they perform the with wooden swords, although many are having trouble with it.  He offers another example, and after several more tries they begin to get the hang of it.
Joacim shows them several more moves and just like before while it takes them a bit to get the move down, when they do they perform it fairly well.  After letting them practice the moves on their own and helping anyone who is still struggling, he has them pair off and lets them spar, practicing the attacks and defenses he has taught them.    
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int. iron keep, shop - night
In the shop of a citizen lucky enough to own their own place another group of trainees are being instructed on how to fight.  But this time, it is not a Templar, but one of the citizens who has already been trained.  Using his own wooden sword, he shows his fellow citizens slashes and blocks which they imitate.
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int. iron keep, the winter fortress, cellar - late night
With dusk several hours over the three younger Templars sit around the table, each of them done with their respective groups and eating a small meal.
OSKAR
After sixteen hours with my group I was expecting them to improve a little more.
JOACIM
They're not soldiers, what did you expect?  Two days, sixteen hours each?  If we want to train as many people as possible we just have to stick to the basics.
OSKAR
That's not going to help too much, but I guess it's better than nothing.
magnus (O.s.)
Of course it will.
Magnus comes down the flight of stairs into the cellar and walks over to the table.  Joacim is about to take a sip of the mug in front of him but Magnus gently grabs his wrists and takes the mug away, sniffing the contents.  He frowns, pouring it out onto the floor.
JOACIM
Hey!  I was drinking that!
MAGNUS
You don't need to be drinking beer right now.  We don't need you, any of you, with a hangover in the morning when you should be teaching more people.  
OSKAR
We were just talking about the classes we were dealing with, Magnus.  How'd yours go?
The elder Templar sighs and slips into a seat, stretching the muscles in his neck.
MAGNUS
Slow, but we managed to make good progress.  I just wish he had another couple of weeks, it would make a great difference.  But, I guess there's no point in getting upset over it, there's nothing we can do to change it.  Anyway, I trust none of you are having any problems with your groups?
STEFAn
There are a few people in mine that are dragging the rest behind.  After sixteen hours they were still having trouble gripping those wooden swords.  It's frustrating.
MAGNUS
Just remember we had years to learn, they have a little over a day.  Though maybe you could spend some extra time with them when you aren't with a group?  
STEFAN
Maybe.  Or maybe some people just aren't cut out for it.
MAGNUS
But I don't want you to lose too much sleep over it, we all need to be wide awake and alert.  Speaking of sleep, you should all get some soon. 
OSKAR
We don't need you to nag us like a hen, Magnus.
The broad shouldered Oskar laughs at his own joke, but realizes no one else is so he awkwardly stops.
JOACIM
Say, where's Wolfgang?  He's usually here about now.
MAGNUS
He's helping set up a new storehouse for some weapons they bought.  In fact, I was supposed to go help him a few minutes ago, I just wanted to check in on you and say you're doing a good job, the people you're training aren't that bad for the time you're spending with them.  Keep it up and this Revolution will be that much easier.
Magnus bids them a good night before making his exit up the stairs.  Joacim grins.
OSKAR
What?
JOACIM
(joking)
He looked straight at me when he said good job.  I guess that, no surprise, he wasn't all that impressed with you.
OSKAR
Oh shut up you conceited bastard.  You're just lucky we don't spar.
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int. iron keep, abandoned home - morning
Aside from the horrid appearance the house has on the outside, the even poorer condition of the home on the inside is another clue that no one has lived in this house for quite some time.  Yet a figure is laying down on a pile of rags, fast asleep.  That is, until a a shoe lightly jabs him in the ribs.  The figure bolts up, looking around before seeing the owner of the foot and sighing.
ANDERS
(sleepy)
What do you want?
Princess Rosen frowns at her brother.
ROSEN
While you were sleeping I found out something important.
ANDERS
Well, it's only been a week.
ROSEN
Oh be quiet.  
The Prince does his best to rub the sleep out of his eyes and stands.
ANDERS
So what did you find out?
ROSEN
Well, it took some convincing, but I learned from some people that some citizens are being selected for training.  
ANDERS
Training?
ROSEN
Yeah, for fighting and things like that.  They didn't say it exactly, but it sounds like they're preparing for a rebellion.
That definitely gets the sleep out of Anders system, his eyes widening.
ANDERS
Are you serious?
ROSEN
Of course I am.  
ANDERS
No way this happening shortly after Magnus is supposed to be in the city can be coincidence.
ROSEN
My thoughts exactly.  That's why we're going to one of these little sessions, see what we can find out.
ANDERS
When do we go?
ROSEN
Let's wait until dusk.  We don't want anyone spotting us.
ANDERS
Fair enough.  You get anything to eat?
ROSEN
Just some bread.
Anders groans.
ANDERS
This is going to be a long day.
Rosen smiles and playfully punches him in the shoulder.
ROSEN
Quit your belly-aching.
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int. iron keep, palace, ravenlord's tower - noon
One of the palace's many citadels serves as the Ravenlord's personal quarters and as a place to experiment with his various magics.  There are shelves full of books and odd parts of various animals in jars and even a few live ones in cages, and even more books stacked on the floor, even a few scrolls can be found here and there.  And sitting behind a desk is the Ravenlord, enthralled with a musty old book.  The text inside it can't be made out, but there is a picture of a sword in it that looks exactly like the one Dronjak has had for over a decade.  The door to the tower swings open and the Ravenlord looks up from his book, quickly shutting it as  the owner of the sword makes his entrance.
Lord dronjak
What do you think you're doing?
RAVENLORD
Excuse me?
LORD DRONJAK
Neither you or Johansson have seen me in quite some time.  I thought I made it clear that I was in control of this kingdom, not you?  
RAVENLORD
We haven't met with you because there's nothing to report.  The Marauders haven't found anything so far and there hasn't been any news..
LORD DRONJAK
And what of your spies?
RAVENLORD
They haven't seen anything as well.
LORD DRONJAK
I'm growing imp--
RAVENLORD
(interrupting)
However, I have found the way into those secret passageways from the Princess' room.  It took some searching, but I found it in the end.
LORD DRONJAK
It would appear you're not completely worthless then.
The Ravenlord frowns at the remark but decides to not respond to it.
RAVENLORD
I imagine if Magnus comes--
LORD DRONJAK
(interrupting)
Oh, he will.  
RAVENLORD
Yes, well, if or when he does I have assigned Marauders to patrol and map the secret passageways.  If anyone tries to sneak into the palace through them, they'll be met with a nice surprise. 
LORD DRONJAK
Excellent.  Order some to go to the Princess' room as well and guard it.  Just in case.
RAVENLORD
Very well.  And what, may I ask, happened with Eppu?
LORD DRONJAK
You were right, it was him, he knew about the passageways and he helped those royal brats escape.   
RAVENLORD
And you rectified your mistake?
LORD DRONJAK
Indeed.
RAVENLORD
At least that's one loose end tied up.  Johansson told me he needs more men, I had some of the palace garrison assist him.
LORD DRONJAK
I thought you had no news to report?
RAVENLORD
Well, nothing important.
Dronjak frowns, suspecting the Ravenlord is still trying to keep him out of the loop.
LORD DRONJAK
Very well.  They are some of the best of the Marauders.  Take as many as you need, just as long as this mess is cleared up.
RAVENLORD
Of course, Lord Dronajk.
Dronjak turns and leaves the way he came in.  When he is sure Dronjak is gone the Ravenlord releases an exasperated sigh and opens his book back up, once again looking it over very closely.
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int. iron keep, the moldy croW INN - late night
Joacim bids farewell to his last class for the night, who disperse to go to their homes and jobs.  Oskar is sitting, having arrived several minutes ago and watching since.  
OSKAR
The great master  Joacim's class running late?  
JOACIM
Let's just say I know what Stefan means when he talks about having slow people in his class.
Oskar laughs.
OSKAR
I've only had one so far, I guess I'm just lucky.
JOACIM
Well, I don't know that...
Joacim trails off, and Oskar doesn't ask why, because they're both looking at the same thing.  A few of the trainees have stopped, being asked questions by a woman and a man who have never been in the tavern before or to any of the other sessions the two Templars know about.  The trainees point the two newcomers in the direction of the Templars.  Approaching them are a man and a woman, a man in his late teens and a woman in her early twenties.  But the Templars are solely paying attention to the woman, a strikingly beautiful woman.
oskar
(whispering)
Why don't I ever get a looker like that in one of my sessions.
JOACIM
(whispering)
Because, you're not the 'great master Joacim', that's why.
OSKAR
(whispering; sarcastic)
Oh, real funny, Joacim.
Despite himself Oskar can't help smiling.
Turning his attention away from Oskar to the beautiful woman who is none other than Princess Rosen, her brother at her side, Joacim flashes his best grin.
JOACIM
Hello, is there something I can help you with?
OSKAR
(whispering)
Don't you mean 'we'?
JOACIM
(whispering)
No.  No I don't.
rosen
I hope so.  I was told that if I was interested in being trained to come here.  
Joacim shrugs.
JOACIM
Yeah, but you're too late, the sessions are done for tonight. 
ROSEN
Oh.  Well, there's one other thing.  I'm looking for someone.
JOACIM
Oh?  Who's that?
She leans in close.
ROSEN
(whispering)
Magnus.
Joacim and Oskar exchange a look of surprise, but manage to compose themselves.
JOACIM
Never heard of him.
Rosen frowns, it wouldn't take a genius to realize he was lying.
ROSEN
But it's important, I have to talk to him.  
OSKAR
Why's that?
ROSEN
I can't say.
Joacim laughs.
JOACIM
Then you're not getting to see this person whom we have never heard of.
ROSEN
But I have to!
JOACIM
(whispering)
Watch and learn.
Oskar raises an eyebrow in curiosity.
JOACIM
Tell you what, you and me one on one in a little sword fight.  Nothing serious, no one gets hurt.  But if you win, I'll tell you what I know about Magnus, which is nothing because I've never heard of him.
Rosen sighs in frustration.
ROSEN
And if you win?
JOACIM
Well, if I win, then you have to join me for dinner tomorrow.
ROSEN
Alright.
Rosen smiles, and Joacim grins as well, standing up and collecting two wooden swords.  But the young Templar has misread Rosen's smile, seeing a smile of delight instead of Rosen smiling as if she were a predator that had just  cornered its prey.  Joacim offers her a wooden sword, which she takes clumsily, almost dropping it, which elicits a laugh from Joacim.  
JOACIM
Don't worry, little maiden , I'll go easy on you.
ROSEN
You sure that will be fair?
JOACIM
Of course.  Are you ready?
ROSEN
I think so.
JOACIM
Alright... go!
Joacim takes a step backwards and raises the wooden sword in a defensive position, his opponent seeming to have no idea how to use what she's holding.  Anders takes a seat next to Oskar, grinning. Oskar notices this, and is confused.
ANDERS
I think your friend walked into more than he can handle.
OSKAR
Well, I wouldn't call him my friend, more like an irritating acquaintance.  What do you mean, anyway?
Anders
You'll see.
Rosen makes the first move, making quick steps forward, making a horrible swing that misses her opponent by a few good feet.  Joacim can't help but smile, saying something about it being too easy.  It's his turn to charge, and he slices forward but only hits air as Rosen moves with incredible speed that surprises him.  She brings her sword down, the wooden blade hitting Joacim in the wrist.  It's Rosen's turn to smile.  Joacim frowns and stabs forward, the Princess deflecting his blow. Joacim continues with his offensive blows but as he fails time and time again it's clear he's getting frustrated and he sighs, which she responds to with a wink, only upsetting the Templar further.  
He takes a step backwards, his opponent now on the offensive and driving him back.  Joacim tries to get off some kind of offensive, but she ducks his swing and slashes upward, catching his other wrist.  He bites his lip in frustration and slashes down, which she blocks and pushes away with surprising strength.  Joacim goes for another swing, but the Princess ducks once again and brings her wooden sword to hit his derriere, causing her to giggle and Joacim to further seethe.  He spins quickly, stopping to find the Princess' sword pointing at his throat.  She smiles slyly.
ROSEN
(innocently)
Maybe I just got lucky?
Joacim's only response is to look surprised and angry all at the same time.
ROSEN (CONT'D)
So, are you going to tell me where I can find Magnus?
MAGNUS (O.S.)
That depends on who--
As Rosen turns around to see the voice, Magnus can see her face clearly, the elder Templar quickly dropping to one knee.  Standing near him are Wolfgang and Stefan, who are as confused as everyone else except Rosen and Anders.  
JOACIM
Magnus, what are you doing?
MAGNUS
(sharply)
Show some respect for the Princess and Prince of Metallicus!
The others look shocked, but do not argue with Magnus and do as he orders.  As Joacim bows before the Princess she can't keep herself from smirking before turning to Magnus.  
ROSEN
Please rise, Magnus, all of you.  But how did you know who we were?
Everyone obliges with the Princess' request, though still a little stunned.  
MAGNUS
I saw you and your brother several times in the palace.  It was ten years ago, but I can still see the similarities between then and now, and you both look like your parents.  Your highness, where in the Realm did you learn to fight like that?
ROSEN
Eppu taught my brother and I.
MAGNUS
(shocked)
Eppu is still alive?  
ROSEN
Maybe not after he showed us the way out of the palace.  
JOACIM
Who's Eppu, Magnus?
Magnus explains that Eppu was an old and well respected Templar who had been Dronjak's mentor.  Magnus inquires further about how she knew to look for him and she and Anders explain how Eppu was blinded with a hot poker and was made into a servant for them.  Despite his handicap he taught them how to fight with a blade and showed them some of the secret tunnels, which helped Rosen spy on Dronjak and the Ravenlord.
WOLFGANG
Excellent!  Not only is the royal family safe, but they have provided us a means to get into the palace!  Praise the Metal God!
This prompts the royal family to ask about the Revolution, and Magnus goes into great detail and in a lengthy conversation tells her everything that has happened since the Templars secretly began rebuilding their ranks and the current plans for the Revolution.
ROSEN
I will help with the Revolution.
MAGNUS
Of course, you and your brother helping us train people would be invaluable.
ROSEN
(unyielding)
No, you misunderstand.  While I could train people as well, I meant help with the Revolution, as in the actual fighting.  
The elder Templar tries to persuade her and Anders that joining in the fighting would be a bad idea since they could be hurt or killed, but they are both adamant about fighting to help free the kingdom, especially Rosen who says she cannot become Queen knowing she stood by while her people did all of the bloody fighting to free the kingdom, and that she owes it to try and free him.  Magnus acquiesces, and the Templars and Wolfgang escort the Princess and Prince to the Winter Fortress' cellar.  
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int. iron keep, the winter fortress, cellar - the next night
Sitting at the table examining the detailed map is Princess Rosen, deep until thought until she hears the stairs creak under someone's weight.  She looks up to see Joacim, the Princess smiling as he joins her.
ROSEN
Have fun?
JOACIM
Well, I wouldn't say training is ever fun, your highness.
She grins.
ROSEN
What about last night?
Joacim laughs.
JOACIM
I wouldn't necessarily call that fun, but definitely a learning experience.  Though, about last night, I'm sorry if I said anything that upset you, I was --
ROSEN
(interrupting)
Don't worry about it.
JOACIM
Maybe you could give me some pointers sometime?
The Princess smiles.
ROSEN
It's a possibility, though it's not like you need them, you're pretty good.
JOACIM
Thanks, but you did a number on me so there's probably some room for improvement.
Rosen winks. 
ROSEN
Well, at least in a few years when people ask you if you've ever been beaten, you can say only by the Queen.
They both laugh but turn their attention to the stairs as someone comes down them, this time it is Magnus.
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int. iron keep, THE MOLDY CROW INN - noon
Inside the tavern Joacim gives some final pointers to his class, the Princess and her brother watching from the side. As they do Joacim can't help but pay more attention to Rosen herself than the moves she is demonstrating.  She notices and he blushes, which causes her to giggle.
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int. iron keep, the winter fortress, cellar - afternoon
Magnus and Wolfgang sit around the map, going over the paths and positions of the Marauder patrols one final time, both of them going over the plan for the Revolution in detail.  They draw blue lines on the map to show the routes the citizens will take and draw blue circles around key points they plan on taking.
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ext. iron keep, courtyard - evening
The sun is down and the courtyard is full to its limit with people, citizens of Metallicus ready to take up the call to arms.  This huge gathering lacks any Marauders, all in the general area fleeing at the massing of such a large number of citizens.  Standing on a makeshift podium is Magnus, the other Templars, the royal family, and Wolfgang nearby.  The commotion from the crowd eventually dies down and Magnus clears his throat so that he can yell for all to hear.
MAGNUS
(yelling)
It seems like only yesterday Metallicus was powerful, rich, and free.  Only yesterday that the King praised me as my mentor watched on with silent yet proud satisfaction and the woman I loved was at my side.  
He lets out a mournful sigh.
MAGNUS (CONt'D)
Then news reached us that the Draconian hordes had invaded the neighboring kingdoms, and in a period that seemed to last forever the Templars of Steel, which I am proud to still be a member of, rallied.  We fought the Draconians and won.
He pauses and there is an uneasy silence, everyone knowing that it wasn't a fairy tale ending for Metallicus.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
When the few hundred out of ten thousand that had survived returned, I had expected a celebration in honor of those who had fought to protect the Realm.  But what I found was my king had been murdered, my mentor had betrayed his people, and an enemy that ambushed us, causing me to be separated from the woman I love in the ensuing chaos.
He pauses once more, in remembrance of those who had been slaughtered in the ambush.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
My mentor, Lord Dronjak, had betrayed us and taken over the kingdom along the Ravenlord, with that band of thugs the Marauders as their army.  The Templars were scattered and broken, thought to be dead by our enemies and fellow citizens of Metallicus.  But they were all wrong.  For the last ten years we have been waiting, licking our deep wounds and secretly rebuilding our numbers.  After all these years, it has been decided the time is ripe to regain our freedom.
He manages to yell even louder and he speaks more passionately.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
I had to stand by in all those years while my people were beaten and robbed, oppressed by outsiders.  But I nor any other Templar of Steel will stand aside any longer.  We the Templars have spread the Revolution throughout the kingdom; soon we will all strike simultaneously across Metallicus.  Old Templars along with the new generation of Templars will work together with the citizens of Metallicus to free our beloved kingdom.  This is a cause everyone of us believes in, and we will not fail.  Let your heart beat for the Revolution!
The cheering and clapping from the gathered citizens in response to Magnus' speech is deafening.  Many begin chanting "Magnus, Magnus!" and "Let your heart beat for the Revolution!".  Magnus raises his right arm high into the air and they continue to cheer.  After a few minutes they begin to mobilize, getting into their positions and groups before heading out down the streets, everyone armed with weapons ranging from swords to pitchforks.
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int. iron keep, palace, dungeon - night
An old man, not Eppu, pants, his face covered with blood and bruises, the garments on his back torn and bloody.  He was unfortunate to have been caught smuggling weapons for the Revolution.  
JOHANSSON
I trust that is what you wanted to know, Lord Dronjak... Ravenlord?
The two tyrants nod.
LORD DRONJAK
Quite.  Johansson, mobilize all the forces you need.  Strike these traitorous rebels before they have a chance to make the first move.  Do whatever is necessary to wipe them out.
JOHANSSON
Of course.  And this man?
RAVENLORD
Dispose of him as you see fit.
Johansson nod, lifting the man up and violently throwing him head first into a brick wall. The former Templar draws his sword and approaches the convulsing old man, but a Marauder runs into the dungeon, panting from exhaustion.
MARAUDER 
My lords, the citizens are up in arms, they're advancing on the palace! 
RAVENLORD
Damnit, we were too late!
JOHANSSON
Don't worry, my Marauders will destroy those peasants.
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ext. iron keep, palace - night
A few hundred Marauders have retreated and massed a ways from the palace, awaiting the rest of the Marauders to join them soon.  The citizens of Metallicus swiftly attack the Marauders, overwhelming them quickly.  Despite their superior numbers the citizens are losing a number of people to the Marauders superior weaponry and combat skill.  Nonetheless the Marauders are forced to retreat under the onslaught, and waiting for them at the palace are a few thousand Marauders, some from the rest of the city and most garrisons from the palace.
The tens of thousands of citizens meet the thousands of Marauders, the people of Metallicus taking their rage at being subjugated for a decade out on the Marauders.  Still suffering heavy casualties the citizens continue to push the Marauders back and wear them down.  The advance slows, however, as the two armies come within range of the archers on the palace, arrows raining down on the citizens who have no defense against this attack.
In response to the arrows the citizens begin to slowly pull back, the Marauders cautiously pursuing and inflicting numerous deaths onthe citizens.  The citizens respond with a fiercer offensive, the Marauders losing much of the ground they had gained.  The civilians, under the order of Magnus, concentrate on making an opening in the Marauder line.  The Templars remove their animal skins, revealing the armor that has been seen earlier a few times that look just as new and lustrous as when they were first forged.  The sight of the Templars charging scares the Marauders and invigorates the citizens who manage to smash through the Marauder lines.  Only several hundred citizens make it behind the enemy lines before the Marauders fill the gap. 
Most of those who broke through stay to fight, giving the rest time to make it to the palace walls while doing their best to avoid arrows.  Though the gate and mammoth doors that are the only visible way into the palace are shut tight, that is not the destination of the revolters, who make it to the familiar tree.  Magnus sees a raven sitting on the tree and pulls out a dagger, throwing it with amazing accuracy that hits the raven and kills it instantly.   
MAGNUS
The Ravenlord... This is near the entrance?
ANDERS
Yes.
MAGNUS
Then we better be careful.
Anders and Rosen approach the wall, carefully feeling.  They hurry when arrows are shot at them and rocks dropped down.  Finally they find the right brick and the door begins to slide open.  Marauders on the other side charge and the Templars do the same. 
The Marauders are outnumbered and with the Templars and royal family present outclassed and soon they're dispatched.  The Princess leads them down the hall and through a few twists and turns before pressing in on a brick, sliding open the secret door to her room where half a dozen Marauders sit.  They leap to their feet at the sight of an enemy to face but are no match for the enemy.
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int. iron keep, palace, hallway - night
The Templars, royal family, and the citizens are gathered together.
MAGNUS
Your highnesses, do you know the way to the gate room?
They shake their heads no.  Magnus sighs and concentrates a few moments, remembering the way to it he hasn't taken for ten years, and he tells them the directions.
JOACIM
Aren't you going?
MAGNUS
I'm going to find Dronjak.
ROSEN
Magnus, he might have guards with him, you should take some people to help you.
Magnus shakes his head.
MAGNUS
No, no one will be with Dronjak, he will want to face me alone.  Good luck, and remember, this Revolution can't succeed until the doors are opened and the portcullis raised.
They nod in understanding and part ways.
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int. iron keep, palace, ravenlord's palace - night
From a window in his citadel the Ravenlord watches the battle, visible thanks to a full moon that provides plenty of illumination.  He frowns.
RAVENLORD
(enraged)
Damnit!  The Marauders are outnumbered.  Maybe the garrisons in the palace can hold them off... but not indefinitely.  If only that idiot Dronjak had not meddled with my orders.  No matter.  Perhaps there is a way to halt the advance...
The Ravenlord puts his hands together and begins muttering some dark incantation.  After several seconds his hands begin to glow and soon flames engulf them.  He spreads his hands apart, a fireball engulfing each but not harming them.  He hurls one of the fireballs, which flies with amazing speed and strikes a building not too far from the battle.  With a mighty explosion of fire the entire building is covered in flames.  He throws the other fireball, which hits several houses with its explosion.  Satisfied, he smiles. 
RAVENLORD
They'll either stop to put it out, or they'll defeat us and the capital will be ashes.  Decisions, decisions.
The Ravenlord makes his way to his desk, where there are two vials.  He pours the green contents into the other vial, mixing the green and purple.  He makes a face at the horrible smell and heads down the flight of spiral stairs that lead up to his citadel.  The Ravenlord passes through the door leading to the rest of the castle. 
RAVENLORD
My secrets shall stay my secrets!
He throws the vial through the doorway and runs as fast as he can, a violent explosion shaking the entire castle.
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ext. iron keep, palace - night
The Ravenlord's tower explodes in a brilliant inferno, the only thing remaining being smoking ruins and flying debris.  Most of the debris smashes into parts of the palace, the rest raining down on Marauders and revolters.
And not too far away from the battle, the violent firestorm caused by the Ravenlord's magic is increasing in fury, spreading over several buildings already.  Some citizens have broken off from the fighting to recover belongings in their house and most of those who have not already joined in on the battle are doing their best to put out the fires, but they do not have the means.
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int. iron keep, palace, throne room - night
Lord Dronjak sits in his throne, though not like before.  He is alert and sitting upright, ready to move a moment's notice.  He is intently watching one of the Ravenlord's smoke and translucent-water like images of the battle raging outside of the palace.  He feels the palace shake violently from the Ravenlord's citadel exploding and looks concerned, but his attention is focused on the door as it groans open and a familiar figure slowly enters.  With a wave of his hand through the magical image it fades away into nothingness.  The tyrant stands to his feet, holding his sword's hilt, the blade in its sheath.
MAGNUS
Dronjak.
DRonjak
Magnus.  It has been a long time.  The years have treated you well my pupil.
MAGNUS
The same can be said for you, Dronjak.  You lost the rest of your hair, but other than that you don't look like you've aged at all.
DRONJAK
The Metal God has blessed me I suppose.
Magnus looks shocked and his face contorts into anger.
MAGNUS
Blessed you?  You've thrown his kingdom into lawlessness!  You've made his kingdom into an unfree land of despair!  Marauders that don't even believe in the Metal God are in control of Metallicus, not its rightful citizens!  You betrayed the King!  How could he bless you?
It is Dronjak's turn to be enraged and he points an accusing finger at his former pupil.
DRONJAK
I made the kingdom safe from outside invasion!  The King was a fool not fit to lead a choir, much less a kingdom.  Yes sacrifices have been made, but it has been for the good of the kingdom!
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int. iron keep, palace, hallway - night
A pair of Marauders guard a large, thick door that leads to the palace treasury.  On their way to the gate room the Templars, royal family, and citizens encounter the guards, quickly killing them before continuing on their way.
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int. iron keep, palace, throne roon - night
Dronjak uneasily paces, his anger continuing to grow.
MAGNUS
You actually believe that, don't you?  
DRONJAK
I've had enough of this, I can see talking to you is nothing but a waste of time.  I tried not to harm you too much ten years ago so that you could live, but you came back.  I only blinded Eppu, so that he could live, yet he forced me to kill him.  Now you're forcing me to fight you.
The former Templar unsheathes his blemished blade, causing Magnus to draw his own.
MAGNUS
No one's forcing you to do anything, Dronjak.
His only response is to leap forward with a yell, bringing his sword violently down, Magnus raising his to block it.  Magnus looks shocked as Dronjak's blow manages to force him to take a step back.  The man a few decades older than Magnus continues his attack, each slash downward getting more violent than the last, Magnus looking as if he's having trouble defending.  
Dronjak raises his sword and Magnus stabs forward, but Dronjak swipes it aside with incredible speed for a man of his age and backhands Magnus.  Dronjak kicks a stunned Magnus to the ground and stabs downward but Magnus manages to roll out of the way just in time.  Magnus begins his own assault on his former mentor with all his vigor, but Dronjak expertly blocks them all.  Magnus growls in confusion and frustration, attacking high and as Dronjak blocks it rushing forward with a knee to his opponent's stomach.  The knee meets Dronjak's armor and doesn't hurt him, but it does knock him back.
Magnus uses this moment to his advantage, thrusting forward at Dronjak's legs.  The tyrant jumps back, but not before getting nicked in the leg.  He only grins at the insignificant wound and presses forward with a renewed offensive.  Magnus deflects the blows as he tries to develop some kind of strategy to get in a truly devastating blow.
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int. iron keep, palace, gate room - night
The room offers a view of the raging battle outside and a view of the doors and portcullis.  A dozen Marauders stand at the ready, Johansson present and doing his best to act as the Marauders' general, runners coming to and from the shut gate to yell up to him and receive his orders.  In the middle of yelling orders for the Marauders to fall back and regroup the door to the room swings open, the Templars, royal family, and the citizens charging in.
The citizens lead the charge and as they come up against the Marauders they find a more difficult enemy than they have faced previously and most are quickly killed.  As the others battle Johansson's elite Marauders he watches the Princess and Prince approach him and he grins.
JOHANSSON
Ah, there you two are.  You left so suddenly that we were worried about you.
ANDERS
Uh huh.
JOHANSSON
Oh, and don't you two look adorable with your little weapons?  Is that supposed to strike fear into my heart?
ROSEN
Come find out.
Johansson is happy to oblige, drawing his sword charging the Princess.  He slices through the air at his opponent, which the Princess blocks and she pushes, forcing Johansson back.  The former Templar is shocked, to say the least.
JOHANSSON
(confused)
But... how long... when have you been able to do that?
ROSEN
For a long time, you traitor.
As the Princess gives Johansson a run for his money the others deal with the elite Marauders.  One of them plunges his sword into the stomach of a citizen and twists the blade, smiling cruelly.  He pulls it out, Joacim knocking it aside with a mighty swing and stabbing his sword into the Marauder, giving him a taste of his own medicine.  The elite Marauders are making short work of the citizens but are no match for the Templars or Prince Anders, who while not as good as his sister is still an impressive swordsman.
A citizen attacks Johansson from the side, hoping to catch him off guard, but he raises his spiked elbow, the citizen impaling himself on it.  This enrages the Princess who resumes her attack, though she has lost some of her concentration and Johansson is able to dodge it and violently kick her in the ribs.  He follows it up with an uppercut, his steel gauntlet catching the Princess in the jaw and flooring her.
Joacim makes his way across the room, making a swing that Johansson only notices at the last second and barely dodges before the blow became lethal, lightly cutting through the armor on his arm.  He curses.
JOhansson
Children, you're all nothing but children!  
While young, they are from children, and Joacim demonstrates this with an assault that leaves Johansson receding.
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int. iron keep, palace, throne room - night
Magnus barely ducks in time, Dronjak's sword slashing the brick wall instead of its intended target, Magnus' neck.  He leaps forward, his shoulder armor catching Dronjak in the nose and knocking the older man back.  Blood drips down Dronjak's nose as the blow leaves him a little dizzy, his defensive moves slowed marginally in result.
Slash.  Stab.  Thrust.  Slice.  Like notes in an intricate song of attack Magnus continues to press his former mentor, for once making him go on the retreat.  Noticing a loose brick, Dronjak pretends to fall, Magnus cautiously advancing.  The older man's fist tightens around the stone brick and he throws it forward, the heavy stone catching Magnus in the face and instantly breaking his nose.  With blood profusely pouring down his face he staggers back, nearly falling over from the brick and still having trouble staying on his feet.  
Dronjak grins at his success and slowly gets to his feet, taking deep breaths, quickly recovering from the shoulder armor to the nose.  Magnus on the other hand, will not have such a quick recovery.
LORD DRONJAK
Give up, Magnus, and I'll only blind you like I did with Eppu.  It's not the best way to live, but it's the only way I can let you live.
MAGNUS
(pained)
Never.
LORD DRONJAK
Again I offer you a chance to walk away from me alive, and again you reject it.
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int. iron keep, palace, hallway - night
The Ravenlord is running through the hallways, stopping at his destination, the palace treasury.  He spots the dead guards but pays them little heed, reaching into one of the many pockets of his clothing and pulling out a key.  He places it in a keyhole and turns, the sound of machines loud as gears swing the doors wide open.  The sorcerer grins satisfied and enters the room.
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int. iron keep, palace, gate room - night
Joacim grits his teeth in pain as he feels Johansson's sword tear through the skin of his arm.  Johansson smiles, finally scoring a hit, and shoots a kick forward.  Joacim moves to block it with his arms, Johansson coming forward with a spiked elbow.  Joacim moves his head to the side, the spike only cutting through his cheek.  The young Templar spits out blood and jumps back out of the reach of the former Templar's sword.
Despite scoring another hit, Johansson's smile is nowhere to be seen as the last of his elite Marauders lies dead on the stone floor.  Even if he kills Joacim, he has five more people to fight his way through.  He growls and slashes down, which Joacim blocks, and shoots his head forward, catching Joacim in a head butt.  Skull impacts with skull in Joacim is sent stumbling back.  Johansson slashes at his opponent's midsection but Joacim rolls out of the way and thrusts his blade, Johansson barely deflecting it and unable to block the gauntlet that covers Joacim's fist from impacting with his chin.
Johansson leaps forward with another slash, which Joacim manages to duck and he spins, getting behind Johansson and slashing down, catching him in the back of the knee.  The lieutenant of the tyrants falters, and turns, but with a hurt knee its slow, and before his slash is complete Joacim's blade has found its way into his abdomen.  Johansson' eyes go wide and he is left shaking his head before collapsing to the floor dead.
ROSEN
Not bad, Joacim.  Certainly a fate that traitor had coming.
OSKAR
So, does anyone actually know which chain works the doors and portcullis?
STEFAN
This could just be a guess, but maybe it's the massive chain not five feet away from you?
Oskar frowns.
oSKAR
I think I liked you better when you didn't talk.
Oskar destroys the chain with his blade and --
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ext. iron keep, palace - night
-- the doors swing open and the portcullis is gradually raised, and while it stops at five feet above the ground, that's all that is needed.
The news of the palace now being open and the archers able to get their comeuppance is news that reenergizes the citizen ranks and they rush the Marauders, whose numbers are dwindling.
And high up in the heavens, a single snowflake floats down.  Several seconds later it is followed by several more.  Then a dozen.
cut to:
int. iron keep, palace, throne room - night
Magnus takes step after step backward, unable to do anything about the vicious and unrelenting attacks of Lord Dronjak.  Dronjak's sword slashes deep into Magnus' thigh and the tyrant slashes upward, digging deep across Magnus' abdomen and chest.  Magnus can't help himself and he drops to a knee from the pain.  He helplessly holds his sword up with one hand, the other one too cut up to be of any help.  Dronjak brings his blade down in slash and slash, and finally his blade cuts through Magnus' and the Templar's sword shatters in half.  If Magnus could feel the muscles in his face through the pain he'd be shocked.
MAGNUS
(weak)
That sword... where... where did you get it?
LORD DRONJAK
It was a gift, from the Ravenlord.
Dronjak now stands in front of Magnus, his sword dangerously close to Magnus.
MAGNUS
(weak)
You... took a gift... from the Ravenlord?  Why would... you do something... that stupid?
Dronjak frowns but he doesn't attack.
LORD DRONJAK
You don't know what it's like.  Ten years ago, when the Templars went off to fight the Draconians, I was sick, my age keeping me from joining the battles.  While you were gone I got worse and I was told I would die.  That is when the Ravenlord offered me this sword.  He said it was magical and would cure me and make me feel young again.
He smiles affectionately as he looks at the sword like it were a good friend.
LORD DRONJAK (CONT'D)
And it has.
Magnus shakes his head as a small pool of crimson develops underneath him.
MAGNUS
(weak)
During the ambush in Iron Keep... you acted insane... you must've been fighting the spell... the sword was putting over you.  
Magnus stares at the puddle of blood beneath him and sighs.
MAGNUS (CONT'D)
(weak)
And it appears that you failed... that you gave in...
Dronjak shakes his head vigorously.
LORD DRONJAK
The Ravenlord putting a spell on me?  You're delirious, Magnus.  
MAGNUS
(weak)
Am I?  Or are were you... just too weak to resist?  Too weak to... just accept death... instead of betraying me... the kingdom... and everyone for an extended life.  You were like a father to me, and --
LORD DRONJAK
(interrupting)
And you were like a son to me, Magnus, which is why it pains me to do this more than you can imagine.
Unable to take anymore of what Magnus is saying, the tyrant grabs a handful of Magnus hair to steady him and slits his throat.  He lets Magnus fall dead in a pool of his own blood and despite the anger on his face their is a hint of sadness.  He sighs and sheathes his bloody sword, opening the loud door and leaving the throne room.
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ext. iron keep, palace - night
The fire rages like an unstoppable beast and continues to spread, until a powerful cold wind blows, slowing its advances.  The number of snow flakes falling has increased by an incredible amount.  
int. iron keep, palace, treasury - night
There is so much gold and jewelry that it is almost blinding in the right light.  There are other valuable things as well, such as sculptures, paintings, and other objects.  While the Ravenlord pockets a few gold coins its apparent he's searching for something specific and growing frustrated that he can't find it.
RAVENLORD
Damnit!  Where is it!
JOACIM (O.S.)
Where's what?
The Ravenlord spins, cursing as he sees the Templars and the royal family.
OSKAR
You will not rob Metallicus anymore than you already have, sorcerer.
The Ravenlord frowns, his hands becoming engulfed with flames once again.  He throws them forward, one hitting Stefan and the other hitting Oskar, sending them tumbling backwards like rag dolls.  Joacim kicks a pot covered in gems, sending it through the air and hitting the Ravenlord in the chest, knocking him backwards into a wall.  An arrow soars through the room, catching Anders in the thigh.  He cries out, and the Prince and Princess turn to see a couple Marauders rush into the room and they meet them head on.
RAVENLORD
You ignorant fool!
JOACIM
You better give up right now, because I'm dying to have a reason to kill you.
The Ravenlord reaches into his cloak and pulls a dagger, throwing it with incredible accuracy as it digs into Joacim's arm.  Joacim swings down, his sword neatly slicing its way through the Ravenlord's right hand.  The sorcerer lets out a yell of pain and slams the hilt of a gold, decorative sword into Joacim's temple.  As Joacim slumps to the ground in incredible pain the Ravenlord runs for the door, pushing the royal family aside as they're still busy fighting Marauders.
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int. iron keep, palace, hallway - night
As the Ravenlord runs, gripping his bloody stump tightly, he begins to shrink.  At first it seems like an optical illusion, but he does indeed, and in the course of a minute he has gone from a tall, bald man into a small raven.  The raven shrieks and lifts up, flapping its wings furiously as it smashes through the glass of a window, taking to the skies quickly.  
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ext. iron keep, palace - night
A furious blizzard has shown itself, freezing winds and large amounts of snow hitting the fires and slowly but surely dousing them.  The Marauder lines are broken once again, and this time it is for good as they shatter and the Marauders break into a retreat, many of them failing to escape the citizens who pour into the open castle, chanting and raising their right fists into the air as they do.  By the end of the night, Iron Keep will be free once again.
cut to:
ext. iron keep, royal graveyard - noon - several days later
It is exactly that, a graveyard, reserved for the royal family of Metallicus and the greatest of its heroes.  Joacim stands at a grave he looks very sad.
JOACIM
(dejected)
It worked, Magnus.  The Marauders didn't know what hit them, and with Iron Keep taken so quickly they fell apart and retreated into the Badlands, even the ones that were going to attack Tiranus.  We couldn't have done it without you, Magnus. Princess Rosen... Queen Rosen, she had her coronation... It was really nice. No one knows what happened to Dronjak or the Ravenlord. There's rumors that they're in the Badlands now, but wherever they are, I swear to you they'll pay, for what they've done to Metallicus, to me, to you...
He lets out a long sigh.
JOACIM (CONT'D)
I don't know if you can even hear me, Magnus.  But I'm sorry.  Sorry for all the times I didn't listen to you, sorry for all the trouble I gave you when you were training me.  You were like a father to me, Magnus, always there for me when I needed you and always helping me become something I can be proud of.  
His eyes water.
JOACIM (CONT'D)
I'll miss you, Magnus, though you're with the Metal God so at least I can be thankful for that.  I guess I will see you soon then, hopefully not too soon though, if you know what I mean...
Joacim kneels at the grave and lays Magnus' broken sword down in front of it.  He gets back on his feet and stares at the grave, tears streaming down his face.  After a few moments he turns and leaves.  Several days after the Revolution there are still many who are celebrating, but he will not be among them.
FADE OUT